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申请延长公寓租期并说明问题Extending an Apartment Lease and Reporting a Problem

Task 1 · General Training请求/申请/询问健康与生活199 词AI 估评 8.5 分
AI 估评 8.5 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 8.25,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA9 / 9

延租时长、计划变化及房屋问题均充分明确,学习安排和居住选择提供相关解释,暖气问题有症状和处理请求,语气礼貌一致。

档位依据:完全恰当满足书信要求,符合9档。

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  • extend my stay for an additional year

    延租时长明确。

  • additional coursework and a research opportunity

    解释变更原因。

  • it takes a long time to warm up the rooms properly

    问题有具体症状。

改进建议

  • 保持当前具体说明原因与问题的方式。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

按租期、原因、设施问题和回复请求推进,指代清楚;问题段以Additionally连接较显式,但不妨碍流畅。

档位依据:8档组织及衔接充分;9档可把主题转换处理得更自然。

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  • The reason for this change is that

    原因与请求紧密连接。

  • If you could arrange for a technician to check it

    it准确指向暖气系统。

改进建议

  • 以简洁的另一个事项提示引入暖气问题。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

rental agreement、settled into、coursework和technician准确贴题;good health and spirit的习惯搭配有轻微偏差。

档位依据:广泛准确的资源支持8档;9档仍受个别习语不自然限制。

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  • in good health and spirit

    通常用in good health and spirits。

  • under what terms

    自然询问续租条件。

改进建议

  • 将问候中的spirit改为spirits,或用更直接的问候。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

时态、关系从句、被动、原因及条件结构准确,复杂句多且清晰。

档位依据:达到8档灵活准确使用结构;9档还需要更充分的句法变化,当前多围绕I have与I would展开。

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  • a research opportunity that I have recently been offered

    完成被动与关系从句准确。

  • Since I have already settled into the apartment

    时间及原因背景表达清楚。

改进建议

  • 可合并重复的I would请求句,维持时态和条件句控制。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

来源页题目,与同页选定答案配套;未核为实际考试真题

Five months ago, you started renting an apartment on a six-month agreement. You now wish to stay in the apartment for longer than the six months you originally agreed with the owner. Write a letter to the owner of your apartment. In your letter, say how long you now want to rent the apartment for explain why your plans have changed tell the owner about a problem in the apartment Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………………..,
Dear Mr Giovanni, I hope this letter finds you in good health and spirit. I am writing to discuss the possibility of extending my rental agreement for the apartment I have been staying in for the past five months. Initially, I had planned to rent the apartment for only six months, but I would now like to extend my stay for an additional year, if possible. The reason for this change is that my Computer Science studies here in Turin have been extended due to additional coursework and a research opportunity that I have recently been offered. Since I have already settled into the apartment and find it very comfortable, I would prefer to continue living here rather than searching for a new place. Additionally, I wanted to bring to your attention a small issue with the heating system. As the colder months are approaching, I have noticed that it takes a long time to warm up the rooms properly. If you could arrange for a technician to check it, I would really appreciate it. Please let me know if an extension would be possible and under what terms. I look forward to your response. Yours sincerely, Halbert Stone
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