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方便面生产流程How instant noodles are manufactured

Task 1 · Academic流程与阶段说明健康与生活182 词AI 估评 8 分
AI 估评 8 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 7.75,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA7 / 9

全部主要操作和输入产物覆盖,六大阶段的概括合理;measured amounts、专用干燥室及先封口再贴标是图未确定的细节。

档位依据:清楚概述和完整主线达到7档;未标明细节与顺序推断限制8档。

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  • measured amounts of water and oil

    图未给测量或定量信息。

  • The cups are then sealed before labels are applied

    图把贴标与封口列为同一步,未支持先后。

  • 题图证据

    已看八编号连续生产图,水油进入混合机,面片切条成盘后油煮干燥,杯中加蔬菜香料,末阶段标Labelling + sealing。

改进建议

  • 按图写加入水油、油煮干燥、贴标和封口,不添加未确定顺序。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

面团加工和最终包装分段,输入产物自然承接,时间连接清楚。

档位依据:良好排序及指代达到8档;Here、Then、In the final stage略显式,未达9档最高自然度。

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  • This mixture then passes through a series of rollers

    承接混合物清楚。

  • In the final stage, the dried noodles are placed into cups.

    转入包装阶段明确。

改进建议

  • 可用物料名称自然过渡,减少连续Then。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

mechanised、progressively flatten、strands、excess moisture等表达丰富自然;powdered flavouring较spices更具体但并未标出粉末形态。

档位依据:宽泛灵活词汇支持8档;少量过具体替换限制9档精度。

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  • progressively flatten it into thin sheets

    动作与形态表达准确。

  • powdered flavouring and vegetables

    原图只标spices,powdered是额外限定。

改进建议

  • 用图示spices,并保留准确的加工动作词。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

被动、关系从句、after which和分词结构准确,复杂过程句清楚。

档位依据:句式范围与多数无误句达到8档;多段相似被动框架可再变化以达9档。

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  • after which they are transferred to a drying chamber

    关系时间结构准确。

  • completing the manufacturing process of instant noodles

    结果分词结构准确。

改进建议

  • 保持时态一致,可将相关成形步骤用主动设备主语表达。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
题目配图:IELTS Graph # 355 – How instant noodles are manufactured
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The diagram depicts the various stages involved in producing instant noodles, from the delivery of raw materials to the final packaging of the finished product. In general, the process consists of a fully mechanised sequence with six main phases: mixing raw materials, preparing the dough, making noodle discs, cooking, drying, and finally, packaging the noodles. The production of instant noodles begins when flour is transported from storage silos to a mixing machine. Here, it is combined with measured amounts of water and oil to form a consistent dough. This mixture then passes through a series of rollers that progressively flatten it into thin sheets. Then, they are cut into long noodle strands by a cutting machine and subsequently shaped into individual noodle discs. These discs are then cooked in oil, after which they are transferred to a drying chamber to remove excess moisture. In the final stage, the dried noodles are placed into cups. At the same time, powdered flavouring and vegetables are added to them. The cups are then sealed before labels are applied, completing the manufacturing process of instant noodles.
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