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英国居民出境旅游目的地If British people travelled abroad and their travel destinations

Task 1 · Academic数据时序变化概括文化与媒体245 词AI 估评 7 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 7,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA7 / 9

两个表的主导类别和起止数据大体准确;概述steady增长与1995下降不符,其他地区也非持续增长,其他出访目的完全未提,北美近翻倍仅称温和增长。

档位依据:主要趋势和数字覆盖支持7档;例外和相对增长的精度限制8档。

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  • increased steadily throughout the five-year period

    总量1995实际下降。

  • Travel to other regions also rose consistently

    其他地区1782降至1752后才上升。

  • 题图证据

    已查看目的表:总量22072、21610、24949、27447、28828;度假15246至20700,商务3155至3957,探亲友2689至3181,其他982、896、1030、1054、990。

  • 题图证据

    已查看地区表:西欧19371至24519,北美919至1823,其他1782至2486;三地区1995均小降后增长。

改进建议

  • 概述说明1995短暂回落,补其他目的基本稳定,区分北美绝对增量小但比例近翻倍。

连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9

目的与地区分段清楚,段内按规模展开;概述与细节例外相抵,最后段过多相似起止句。

档位依据:总体推进符合7档;前后表述一致性和句间变化限制8档。

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  • this figure rose each year, except for 1995

    细节给出概述遗漏的例外。

  • Regarding destinations

    明确转换资料。

改进建议

  • 同步概述和细节的时间描述,合并次要地区作对照。

词汇资源 LR7 / 9

accounted for、upward trend和by far等适用;Brits较口语,modest growth未说明绝对或相对,量词精度有限。

档位依据:词汇有变化支持7档;语域与增长程度精度限制8档。

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  • More and more Brits travelled abroad

    Brits和More and more略口语。

  • North America as a destination witnessed a modest growth

    可用visits to North America almost doubled,搭配也更直接。

改进建议

  • 统一UK residents,说明北美访问几乎翻倍而仍远少于西欧。

语法范围与准确性 GRA7 / 9

关系从句、分词及比较基本准确;a modest growth不必要冠词,个别长句并列较重。

档位依据:正确复杂句频繁达到7档;少量名词结构错误及灵活性限制8档。

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  • detailing their reasons for travel, and showing which regions they visited

    分词并列和宾语从句正确。

  • witnessed a modest growth

    这里growth通常不可数,应省a。

改进建议

  • 删除growth前不当冠词,并简化长引言的并列修饰。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

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The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people, asking if they travelled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Visits abroad by UK residents by purpose of visit (1994-1998) Destinations of visits abroad by UK residents by main regions (1994-98)
题目配图:IELTS Graph # 338 – If British people travelled abroad and their travel destinations
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题目配图:IELTS Graph # 338 – If British people travelled abroad and their travel destinations
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The tables provide information on the number of UK residents who travelled abroad between 1994 and 1998, detailing their reasons for travel, and showing which regions they visited over the same period. The survey was conducted with a large sample of 100,000 individuals. As a general trend, the total number of overseas trips by British citizens increased steadily throughout the five-year period. Holidays were consistently the most common reason for travel, while Western Europe remained by far the most popular destination for those visitors. As the first table depicts, more than 22,000 Brits travelled abroad in 1994, and this figure rose each year, except for 1995, to cross 28,000 in 1998. Holiday travel accounted for the largest share during the entire period, growing from 15,000 in 1994 to well over 20,000 in 1998. More and more Brits travelled abroad for business purposes as the number of such travellers increased gradually, rising from 3,155 to almost 4,000. Visits to friends and relatives followed a similar upward trend, moving from 2,689 to 3,181. Regarding destinations, Western Europe was the favourite destination of British people travelling abroad, with trips increasing from 19,000 in 1994 to over 24,000 in 1998. North America as a destination witnessed a modest growth, starting at 919 visits in 1994 and reaching 1,823 by 1998. Travel to other regions also rose consistently, from 1,782 to 2,486 over the same period.
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