向旅行社反馈假期体验Feedback to travel agent about holiday
AI 估评 7.5 分查看四维评分详情
四个维度等权计分，均值 7.5，按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA8 / 9
已做活动、未来计划和喜爱原因全部充分相关，感谢推荐得体；对目的地优点的说明稍偏概括。
档位依据：8档清楚充分回应成立；9档可更具体连接喜爱原因与亲历细节。
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last week I went to Aqua World and saw the dolphin show
经历具体。
combining my interest in water sports with the chance to experience culinary delights
喜欢理由相关。
改进建议
- 用一项具体美食体验支撑喜爱该地的原因。
连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9
按已做、将做及评价组织清楚；To begin with、Additionally和After that等连接密集，末段再次泛泛概括较重复。
档位依据：逻辑推进符合7档；8档需减少显式连接和重复。
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Additionally, I’ve been swimming every day
列举连接稍机械。
Also, there has never been a dull moment
与前句优点评价重叠。
改进建议
- 依时间自然串联活动，减少额外列举词。
词汇资源 LR7 / 9
get a great tan、five-course dinner和culinary delights显示一定范围；Prior to my vacation finishing与coffee in that famous store不够自然。
档位依据：有灵活词汇但搭配不稳定，符合7档；8档需自然精确。
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Prior to my vacation finishing
名词化表达生硬。
a five-course dinner
餐饮词汇准确。
改进建议
- 用before my holiday ends，并明确是咖啡馆或商店内咖啡区。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
完成时、将来计划、关系从句及Time permitting结构准确，多数句子无误；experience之后逗号不必要。
档位依据：8档范围与准确性成立；9档需更稳定标点和自然句法。
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share my holiday experience, so far.
逗号不必要地分开状语。
Time permitting, I will finish with a coffee
独立结构正确。
改进建议
- 删除experience后的逗号并简化假期结束前的时间句。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
作文题目
既有2026原书教学情境，未把信件虚构日期当考试日期。
Your local travel agent recommended a place to visit and you are now having a good time there. Write a letter to your travel agent and tell them the following:
- what you have been doing
- what you hope to do before the end of your holiday
- say why you like this place
Dear Mr. Hansen,
I am writing to you as promised in order to share my holiday experience, so far.
To begin with, last week I went to Aqua World and saw the dolphin show. Additionally, I’ve been swimming every day and I am starting to get a great tan. Yesterday, I met some other hotel guests from my country, and we had lunch together.
Prior to my vacation finishing, I have made plans to go out on a trek this Saturday. I’m really looking forward to it. After that, I hope to take a river cruise which also includes a five-course dinner. Time permitting, I will finish with a coffee in that famous store you recommended that is in Rundle Mall.
I am so pleased with this destination because it is an excellent holiday location, combining my interest in water sports with the chance to experience culinary delights. Also, there has never been a dull moment as there is so much to do and experience.
Once again thank you so much for your excellent recommendation.
Yours sincerely, Sam Smith
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