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塑料瓶回收的九个步骤Recycling plastic bottles nine stages

Task 1 · Academic流程与阶段说明环境与动物164 词AI 估评 8.5 分
AI 估评 8.5 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 8.5,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA9 / 9

九阶段概述及主要处理环节完整,分拣废物、清洗碎片、制粒再加热的关系准确,结尾明确产品可再次进入回收循环。例示瓶子、袋和容器均由图支持。

档位依据:全部关键过程及循环性质均被充分恰当地报告,符合9分。

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  • recyclable bottles are separated from non-recyclable waste.

    准确解释分拣图中保留与剔除两类物品。

  • These products, once used, can be recycled, creating a circular process.

    准确解读最终产品返回回收箱的箭头。

  • 题图证据

    图1清晰显示九个编号阶段,另有Washing标签;正文没有将制粒和加热次序倒置,终产品图包含瓶、衣服、袋、容器及铅笔,例举选取恰当。

改进建议

  • 保持对循环箭头及清洗、制粒、加热先后关系的准确说明。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

概述后按收集分拣与后续加工分段,句子多以前一步产物作主语,容易跟随。Upon arrival、Following this等标记有效,但连续顺序词稍显刻意。

档位依据:逻辑推进和段落组织良好达到8分;部分衔接仍可更自然紧凑,未达9分。

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  • The selected bottles are then compressed into compact cubic blocks

    承接已分拣瓶子,信息链条清楚。

  • In the next stage, the cleaned fragments are processed through a machine

    前一步清洗后的产物自然作为后续操作对象。

改进建议

  • 减少重复的stage标记,继续用处理后的产物来衔接步骤。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

compression、fragments、pellets、raw material等用词准确,能灵活改述图示,拼写词形稳定。stages like较宽泛,若列举关键工序可采用更正式而确定的表达。

档位依据:技术词汇及常用词搭配熟练,符合8分;少量表达精度尚不够9分。

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  • compressed into compact cubic blocks

    准确表达压缩后块状物。

  • the bottles undergo stages like compression, crushing, washing, and heating

    主要工序表达正确,like可换including或直接用undergo compression等。

改进建议

  • 让undergo直接接工序名称,减少stages like这类宽泛措辞。

语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9

被动、时间省略、关系从句和分词结果结构广泛准确;复杂句中的加工对象和时间先后保持清楚。

档位依据:任务范围内结构灵活且充分准确,符合9分。

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  • which are subsequently crushed into smaller fragments.

    关系从句及被动准确修饰压缩块。

  • These products, once used, can be recycled, creating a circular process.

    省略时间结构、情态被动与结果分词配合准确。

改进建议

  • 保持长句中的关系词指代和分词结构控制。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

公开教学题目;原图/考题来源与范文作者分开,具体考试日期未自行核实。

The diagram shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Plastic bottles IELTS Sample
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The diagram illustrates the stages involved in recycling plastic bottles. Overall, the process consists of nine steps. After being placed in the recycling bins, the bottles undergo stages like compression, crushing, washing, and heating to transform into raw material, which is then used in the manufacturing of new products. In the first stage, used plastic bottles are collected from bins and transported to recycling facilities by specialized trucks. Upon arrival, recyclable bottles are separated from non-recyclable waste. The selected bottles are then compressed into compact cubic blocks, which are subsequently crushed into smaller fragments. Following this, the crushed pieces are transferred into a large container where they are thoroughly washed. In the next stage, the cleaned fragments are processed through a machine that converts them into plastic pellets, which then go through a heating process to produce raw plastic material for the production of various plastic items, including new bottles, bags, and containers. These products, once used, can be recycled, creating a circular process.
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