投诉多次延迟送货Repeated delivery delays complaint
AI 估评 9 分查看四维评分详情
四个维度等权计分,均值 9,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA9 / 9
两票货件、承诺与实际延迟、实际损失和处理要求都具体完整,正式语气坚定得体。
档位依据:全部任务要求充分恰当满足,符合9档。
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arrived three and four working days late respectively
分别量化延误。
refund the next-day delivery charges
补救要求明确。
改进建议
- 保持各次延误与相应后果的清楚对应。
连贯与衔接 CC9 / 9
货件概述、两次影响、处理要求和回复期限依次推进,first与second清楚区分案例,回指自然。
档位依据:读者能轻松跟随,符合9档。
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The first parcel contained printed materials
按货件分述。
On both occasions
准确归纳共同问题。
改进建议
- 维持分述个案后归纳共同问题的结构。
词汇资源 LR9 / 9
consignments、emergency print run、revised date和corrective action精确自然,商务投诉词汇灵活。
档位依据:任务范围内词汇精确且充分灵活,符合9档。
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a local emergency print run
具体说明额外开支。
remaining indefinitely marked for delivery
准确说明追踪状态问题。
改进建议
- 继续用具体物流状态及损失描述。
语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9
被动、原因和关系从句、分词及间接问句准确,复杂句处理自然,标点稳妥。
档位依据:广泛结构与充分控制符合9档。
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Because it did not arrive before the event
因果与时间关系清楚。
explaining the outcome of your investigation and any corrective action
分词修饰与并列准确。
改进建议
- 保持复杂请求与事实陈述的清晰句法。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
来源声明虚构原创教学题,未称实考回忆。
A delivery company has repeatedly delivered important packages late. Write a letter to its manager. Describe the deliveries, explain the problems the delays caused, and state what action you expect.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing about two important parcels delivered late by your Brookton service this month. Tracking references BR1842 and BR1975 were both booked for next-day delivery to my office, but arrived three and four working days late respectively.
The first parcel contained printed materials for a training session. Because it did not arrive before the event, I had to pay for a local emergency print run. The second contained replacement parts needed to restore a shared office printer, so six colleagues were unable to use that machine for several additional days. On both occasions, the tracking page continued to show ‘out for delivery’ without a revised date.
Please investigate why these consignments missed their promised dates and refund the next-day delivery charges. I would also like confirmation that future failed deliveries will receive an accurate revised date rather than remaining indefinitely marked for delivery. Copies of the booking receipts and tracking histories are available if required.
I would appreciate a written response within ten working days explaining the outcome of your investigation and any corrective action. I hope this matter can be resolved before I need to choose a different service for future business deliveries.
Yours faithfully,
Alex Morgan
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