给来访朋友的建议Advice for a visiting friend
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四个维度等权计分,均值 9,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA9 / 9
月份建议有天气、价格和拥挤程度的具体理由,景点活动丰富,帮助涵盖住宿和接送陪游,语气自然亲切。
档位依据:全部要求充分而适切满足,符合9档。
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Try to avoid the first week, though, because there’s a national holiday
日期建议有明确例外和原因。
I’ll also take a couple of days off work so I can show you around.
帮助具体且体现朋友关系。
改进建议
- 保持建议与理由、个人帮助相结合的写法。
连贯与衔接 CC9 / 9
按时间、活动和帮助组织,各段自然递进,though和of course符合朋友交流,条件连接清楚。
档位依据:组织熟练且衔接几乎不引人注意,符合9档。
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There’s plenty to do.
自然引入活动段。
You’re welcome to stay with me, of course.
顺畅转到实际帮助。
改进建议
- 维持每段一个主要功能及自然过渡。
词汇资源 LR9 / 9
hardly ever、spare room、take a couple of days off和show you around自然精准,词汇灵活适应非正式语气。
档位依据:任务范围内自然、准确、灵活的词汇控制符合9档。
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full of narrow streets and tiny cafes
景点描写具体。
pick you up from the airport
习惯表达自然。
改进建议
- 继续用具体地点特征和自然短语展开建议。
语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9
条件、原因、关系从句与祈使建议灵活准确,缩写和标点适应亲友书信,复杂与简单句配合自然。
档位依据:范围和控制充分达到9档。
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If you can choose your dates, I’d come in October.
条件建议自然准确。
the old town, which is full of narrow streets and tiny cafes
非限定关系从句标点准确。
改进建议
- 维持条件建议与解释从句的清晰搭配。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
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A friend from another country is coming to visit your city for the first time and has asked for your advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
suggest when to come
recommend what to see and do
offer some help with the visit
Dear Marco,
It was great to hear from you, and even better to hear that you’re finally coming to visit!
If you can choose your dates, I’d come in October. The summer heat has gone by then, it hardly ever rains, and the hotels are much cheaper than in August. Try to avoid the first week, though, because there’s a national holiday and everything gets crowded.
There’s plenty to do. You have to see the old town, which is full of narrow streets and tiny cafes, and I know you’ll love the food market by the river. If you like walking, we could spend a day in the hills just outside the city. The view from the top is amazing.
You’re welcome to stay with me, of course. I’ve got a spare room, and I can pick you up from the airport if you send me your flight details. I’ll also take a couple of days off work so I can show you around.
Let me know what you decide. I can’t wait to see you!
Best wishes,
Sam
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