寻找火车上遗失的笔记本电脑包Lost laptop bag on train
AI 估评 9 分查看四维评分详情
四个维度等权计分，均值 9，按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA9 / 9
物品识别、遗失时地和归还办法全部充分具体，姓名卡与序列号有助核对所有权，取件时间和备选递送清楚。
档位依据：各项要求充分恰当满足，符合9档。
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a narrow orange strap attached to the front zip
识别特征独特。
collection from Brookton station on any weekday after 4 p.m.
归还安排明确。
改进建议
- 保持物品识别、行程线索与认领办法的完整对应。
连贯与衔接 CC9 / 9
先定位行程再描述物品和遗失位置，最后检索与归还，主题转换自然，代词及条件连接明确。
档位依据：信息可轻松跟随，组织符合9档。
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Inside it are a silver laptop
从外观自然转向内容。
Alternatively, I am willing to pay a reasonable delivery charge
备选归还方式关系清楚。
改进建议
- 维持外观、内容、位置分层介绍的方式。
词汇资源 LR9 / 9
canvas、distinguishing feature、overhead rack和proof of ownership精确自然，描述细节充分但不含混。
档位依据：任务范围内广泛且精确的词汇使用符合9档。
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a dark-blue canvas shoulder bag
材质颜色款式准确。
the laptop's serial number and proof of ownership
认领核实用语自然。
改进建议
- 继续用可核对的具体特征区分遗失物。
语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9
倒装、分词修饰、关系从句、条件与间接问句准确灵活，复杂清单与标点处理稳妥。
档位依据：语法范围与控制充分，符合9档。
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Inside it are a silver laptop, a black charger
倒装与并列清单准确。
whether the description matches anything held at Brookton
嵌入问句及过去分词修饰准确。
改进建议
- 保持长名词清单与修饰结构的清晰控制。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
作文题目
来源声明虚构原创教学题，未称实考回忆。
You left an important item on a train. Write a letter to the railway company's lost-property office. Describe the item, explain when and where you lost it, and state how the office can return it to you.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to report a laptop bag that I left on one of your trains yesterday, 18 September. I travelled on the 17:42 service from Ashford Central to Brookton and got off at Brookton at approximately 18:15. I was sitting in the second carriage, near the rear door.
The bag is a dark-blue canvas shoulder bag measuring about 40 centimetres across. Its distinguishing feature is a narrow orange strap attached to the front zip. Inside it are a silver laptop, a black charger, a paper notebook labelled ‘Project Field Notes’ and a clear folder containing course documents. My name, Alex Morgan, is written on a card in the inner pocket.
I placed the bag on the overhead rack after boarding and only noticed it was missing when I reached home. I can provide the laptop's serial number and proof of ownership if the bag has been found. I would be grateful if your staff could check items collected from that service and let me know whether the description matches anything held at Brookton or the central office.
If you locate the bag, please contact me at the email address supplied with this letter. I can arrange collection from Brookton station on any weekday after 4 p.m. Alternatively, I am willing to pay a reasonable delivery charge if collection is not possible. Thank you for your assistance.
Yours faithfully,
Alex Morgan
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