就管理项目向前辈请教Seeking Guidance on a Management Project
AI 估评 7 分查看四维评分详情
四个维度等权计分,均值 7,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA7 / 9
求助目的与情境清楚,指出了期限和团队两项难点;具体希望得到哪类做法仍较笼统,前言占较多篇幅。
档位依据:7档相关覆盖成立;8档需把请求落实到具体指导内容。
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a rather impractical deadline
说明指导需求。
share those valuable experiences with me to make my job easier
提出经验请求但缺少具体问题。
改进建议
- 明确询问如何分配任务或规划里程碑。
连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9
背景、困难与请求的顺序合理,but和because等衔接有效;开头多次铺垫,长段落堆积几层解释。
档位依据:总体清晰符合7档;8档需更简洁地推进。
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But, first, let me explain the situation to you.
显式铺垫可缩短。
Thankfully, I have learned that you have some solid experience
从困难转入对方经验。
改进建议
- 压缩第一段,把期限与团队困难分清。
词汇资源 LR7 / 9
seasoned professional、privileged和tight deadlines体现一定范围;crew of executives和重复professional不够自然。
档位依据:能灵活表达但有不恰当搭配,符合7档;8档需更准确自然。
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a seasoned professional and executive
表达资深身份。
a rather inexperienced crew of executives and professionals
crew用于该管理团队不够贴切。
改进建议
- 用team称呼管理项目团队,减少professional的重复。
语法范围与准确性 GRA7 / 9
能用让步、原因、被动及嵌套从句,多数结构清楚;a such big次序错误,长句标点略繁。
档位依据:复杂结构有准确性,符合7档;8档需更稳定的词序和句子控制。
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While I feel quite excited and privileged to have been offered this important role
让步和完成被动结构准确。
to handle a such big project
应为such a big project。
改进建议
- 修正such a的词序,并拆分过长的焦虑原因句。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
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Lately, your company has informed you that you will be taking a lead role in an upcoming management project.
Write a letter to a senior asking for guidance and request him/her to share his/her experience with you.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Mr/ Mrs ……………..,
Dear Mrs Lopez,
I hope that you are doing well. I also hope that you are not too busy to help me with something really important. I am reaching out to you because I could definitely use some guidance and professional advice from a seasoned professional and executive like you. But, first, let me explain the situation to you.
I have recently been offered a leading role as an Assistant Project Manager for our new management project in the downtown area. While I feel quite excited and privileged to have been offered this important role, I am also nervous at the same time. And I am anxious, not because I am not qualified or skilled enough to handle a such big project, but because I have been asked to complete it within a rather impractical deadline, and that too with the help of a rather inexperienced crew of executives and professionals.
Thankfully, I have learned that you have some solid experience in finishing such projects within very tight deadlines, and it is my wish that you would be kind enough to share those valuable experiences with me to make my job easier.
Thank you in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Shean Lee
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