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赖茅斯村在1995年至今的变化Ryemouth village from 1995 to the present

Task 1 · Academic地图与空间布局/变化描述城市与交通178 词AI 估评 7.5 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 7.5,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA7 / 9

正文准确覆盖农田与森林公园改休闲设施、海边商店及鱼市转换、港口消失与住宅小幅增加;遗漏酒店旁新停车场及咖啡馆保留,并对Present作具体时间推断。

档位依据:清楚识别主要变化达到7档;缺少若干支持细节和时间谨慎性,未达到8档充分呈现。

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  • Now this is a golf course and tennis courts.

    东北农田改高尔夫、森林公园改网球场,概括准确。

  • the shops have been replaced by restaurants

    旧商店位置在现状图标为餐厅。

  • Nearly three decades later

    图只写Present,未给出现状具体年份。

  • 题图证据

    图标1995与Present;酒店旁新增car park,cafe和hotel保留;鱼市变apartments、渔港消失。

改进建议

  • 补充酒店旁停车场与保留的酒店/咖啡馆,不给Present强加年份。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

引言及总览后分述1995与现状,现状段按住宅、东北与海岸推进;衔接自然。

档位依据:信息排序易跟随、段落管理适当,达到8档;第二段there较泛,未达9档。

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  • In 1995, Ryemouth was a village on the sea

    建立旧貌段的时间框架。

  • However, much larger changes have taken place where the farmland and forest park were.

    自然从住宅小变动转向东北部大变动。

改进建议

  • 用方位词替代少量含混的there。

词汇资源 LR7 / 9

residential area、coastline、waterfront等地图词适切,但many/larger changes与taken place反复,转换类型的词汇可更具体。

档位依据:足够灵活清楚达到7档;范围与精度未稳达8档。

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  • Many changes have taken place

    概述变化但表达较泛。

  • Along the waterfront, the fishing port has been removed

    waterfront和fishing port适合海岸地图。

改进建议

  • 用converted into、replaced by等具体用途变化词减少泛化重复。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

关系从句、现在完成、过去时与被动结构灵活准确,大多数句子无误。

档位依据:复杂结构准确达到8档;未充分显示9档完全灵活的范围。

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  • the first of which shows a village called Ryemouth in 1995

    非限定关系结构准确。

  • the shops have been replaced by restaurants

    现状比较使用现在完成时被动,结构正确。

改进建议

  • 维持不同时点的时态区分。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

来源逐字题干:IELTS Buddy 同版地图例题;题图与范文来自 TED IELTS。实际考试出处未独立核实。

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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题目材料说明:题干已与配套教学练习题核对;是否为官方考试原卷尚未核实。原图未标明确切年份。

There are two maps, the first of which shows a village called Ryemouth in 1995 and the second in the present day. Many changes have taken place, particularly in the northeast and along the coastline. In 1995, Ryemouth was a village on the sea with housing in the north and farmland to the east of it. There was a forest park beside the farmland and, to the south of that, a hotel. A road ran alongside the coast and it had shops, a fish market, and a fishing port there. There was also a café. Nearly three decades later, the residential area is largely unchanged, although a small number of homes have been added and a road has been built in that area, too. However, much larger changes have taken place where the farmland and forest park were. Now this is a golf course and tennis courts. Along the waterfront, the fishing port has been removed and so has the fish market. In their place are apartments, while across the road the shops have been replaced by restaurants.
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