澳大利亚人定期运动的比例Percentage of Australians who did regular physical activity
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任务完成度 TA7 / 9
各年龄组和两性走势覆盖清楚,数值近似基本正确;末句把定期运动改成每天运动,另将约8个百分点写为8%,表达含义有偏差。
档位依据:概述与主要特征支持7档;频率及差值口径不准确阻止8档。
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men’s activity levels declined in middle age before recovering somewhat in their later years
正确概括男性年龄分布。
with roughly 47% of them exercising daily
图只说定期,不能推出每天。
- 题图证据
已查看柱图,六组男性/女性百分比依次52.8/47.7、42.2/48.9、39.5/52.5、43.1/53.3、45.1/53、46.7/47.1。
改进建议
- 保留regularly而非daily,性别差值写8 percentage points。
连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9
按年龄递增组织,概述后两段细节清楚;Moreover等连接略机械,多个同型年龄开头有重复。
档位依据:顺序清楚符合7档;连接与分组尚未充分自然达到8档。
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The gap widens in the 35-44 age group
用差距串起相邻年龄组。
Moreover, 45% of 55 to 64-year-old males did regular exercise
递进词较机械,实际上是下一个年龄组。
改进建议
- 用最大差距和末期趋同组织细节,减少逐组列举。
词汇资源 LR7 / 9
age bracket、surpassed、lagged等范围充分;ratio of regular exercise和observed among略不自然,频率词daily不精确。
档位依据:足够灵活的词汇支持7档;搭配和概念精确性限制8档。
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women generally surpassed men in terms of their ratio of regular exercise
ratio of exercise不自然,应直接比较参与比例。
the figures for men and women were nearly identical
近似相等表达准确。
改进建议
- 用participation rate及percentage-point gap明确指标。
语法范围与准确性 GRA7 / 9
多种比较和关系从句基本准确;两次百分比后漏of,且过去背景中The gap widens时态不一致。
档位依据:正确复杂句频繁达到7档;持续的小错误阻止8档。
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about 53% men reported regular physical exercise
应为53% of men。
roughly 53% women, while men lagged at about 43%
再次漏of,但while对照清楚。
改进建议
- 检查所有百分比加人群结构中的of,并统一过去时。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activity: 2010

The bar chart outlines the proportion of Australian men and women, divided into six age groups, who engaged in regular physical activity in 2010.
Overall, a higher percentage of Australian females participated in regular physical activity than men in most age groups in 2010, except the youngest participants. Moreover, men’s activity levels declined in middle age before recovering somewhat in their later years, whereas women’s participation rose steadily until middle age and then declined slightly in older age.
In detail, in the 15 to 24 age bracket, about 53% men reported regular physical exercise, compared to about 48% of women. However, from the age of 25 onwards, women generally surpassed men in terms of their ratio of regular exercise. For instance, 49% of Australian women between 25 and 34 were active compared to approximately 42% of men of that age. The gap widens in the 35-44 age group, in which only about 39% of men but over 52% of women exercised regularly.
In the 45 to 54 age group, regular physical activity could be observed among roughly 53% women, while men lagged at about 43%. Moreover, 45% of 55 to 64-year-old males did regular exercise, and females in this age group were higher by 8%. Finally, in the 65-and-over group, the figures for men and women were nearly identical, with roughly 47% of them exercising daily.
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