英国信息技术与服务业的国内生产总值UK GDP from IT and service industry 1992–2000
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任务完成度 TA9 / 9
准确概述共同上升与信息技术领先，区分前后阶段，报告1996回落及终点近两倍差距，主要数值与图相符。
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it dropped slightly from 1994 to 1996.
准确抓住信息技术唯一小幅回落。
almost twice that of the Service Industry.
与2000年约14.8%和8.2%相符。
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图1信息技术约6.3、8.2、7.8、12、14.8%；服务业约4、6.5、7、7.6、8.2%。正文阶段与比较均吻合。
改进建议
- 保持概述、阶段和末期差距相结合的选择方式。
连贯与衔接 CC9 / 9
概述后按前四年与后四年分组，末句用比例总结差距，衔接自然且易跟随。
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Over the next four years
清楚推进到1996。
over the following four years
自然对应后一阶段。
改进建议
- 继续以显著变化阶段组织数据。
词汇资源 LR8 / 9
accounted for、components及sharply准确，趋势表达灵活；higher rate用于占比略不精确。
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the Service Industry accounted for 4 per cent
数据表达准确。
IT remained at a higher rate
此处higher share或proportion更精确。
改进建议
- 用share或proportion区分占比与增长率。
语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9
比较、让步、非谓语和被动结构准确，时间和数值关系清楚，标点稳定。
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with both components standing between 6 and just over 8 per cent.
with结构准确。
while the Service Industry stayed nearly the same
对比从句准确。
改进建议
- 保持时间范围和比较从句的清楚对应。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
作文题目
公开教学样题；未核实考试日期。
The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the gross domestic product generated from the IT and Service Industry in the UK from 1992 to 2000. It is measured in percentages. Overall, it can be seen that both increased as a percentage of GDP, but IT remained at a higher rate throughout this time.
At the beginning of the period, in 1992, the Service Industry accounted for 4 per cent of GDP, whereas IT exceeded this, at just over 6 per cent. Over the next four years, the levels became more similar, with both components standing between 6 and just over 8 per cent. IT was still higher overall, though it dropped slightly from 1994 to 1996.
However, over the following four years, the patterns of the two components were noticeably different. The percentage of GDP from IT increased quite sharply to 12 in 1998 and then nearly 15 in 2000, while the Service Industry stayed nearly the same, increasing to only 8 per cent.
At the end of the period, the percentage of GDP from IT was almost twice that of the Service Industry.
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