申请参加数据分析课程Requesting permission to attend data analysis course
AI 估评 9 分查看四维评分详情
四个维度等权计分,均值 9,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA9 / 9
课程、工作收益及离岗覆盖均具体充分。人工建表的实际困难与自动化学习直接相连,量化节时和客户工作收益有说服力。
档位依据:所有要求充分恰当满足,符合9档。
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the monthly sales report takes me almost two days
工作问题具体。
Farah, who is happy to take my customers’ calls
覆盖安排明确。
改进建议
- 保持实际工作瓶颈、课程内容与收益之间的对应。
连贯与衔接 CC9 / 9
课程介绍后自然转入现状、改善及离岗安排,that与those three days指代清楚,逻辑推进轻松。
档位依据:连贯衔接与段落管理达到9档。
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The course teaches ways of automating that
自然承接手工建表。
As for my absence
转入安排清楚。
改进建议
- 保留现状与改善效果直接对照的结构。
词汇资源 LR9 / 9
sales figures、automating、customer accounts及by hand准确自然,普通词也能灵活传达工作流程变化。
档位依据:任务范围内充分灵活精确,符合9档。
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I build every table by hand
清楚说明手工流程。
give the rest of the time to customer accounts
自然说明节省时间的用途。
改进建议
- 维持具体工作流程词汇,避免抽象堆砌效率形容词。
语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9
间接问句、限定和非限定关系从句、原因目的结构及条件请求准确,句式变化自然。
档位依据:复杂结构与标点充分受控,符合9档。
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people who already use these tools but have never been trained in them
关系从句内并列和被动准确。
before I leave so that nothing is delayed
时间及目的从句协调。
改进建议
- 保持时间安排与目的从句的准确组合。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
IELTS Lab教学用情境练习;未证为官方IELTS或实考题。
You work for a company and would like to attend a training course that would help you in your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
describe the course
explain how it would help you in your work
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr Hossain,
Dear Mr Hossain,
I am writing to ask whether I could attend a three-day course on data analysis next month.
The course is run by the City Business School from 14 to 16 May. It covers spreadsheets, charts and writing short reports from sales figures, and it is designed for people who already use these tools but have never been trained in them.
I think it would make a real difference to my work. At the moment the monthly sales report takes me almost two days, mostly because I build every table by hand. The course teaches ways of automating that, so I could finish the report in a morning and give the rest of the time to customer accounts.
As for my absence, I have spoken to Farah, who is happy to take my customers’ calls on those three days, and I would finish the April report before I leave so that nothing is delayed.
I would be grateful if you could let me know whether this is possible.
Yours sincerely,
Imran Ali
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