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独居的利弊The Pros and Cons of Living Alone

Task 2 · 来源范文判断正面或负面影响家庭与社会277 词AI 估评 8.5 分
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任务回应 TR8 / 9

两问充分回应,原因有机制,社会层面的消费与医疗影响明确。独居者更活跃的概括尚可进一步限定。

档位依据:充分展开达到8分;少量支持精度不足9分。

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  • they can afford to make the choice to live alone

    直接说明经济原因。

  • which would need to be dealt with by public health care services.

    将个体心理风险连接到社会影响。

改进建议

  • 以年轻城市独居者为明确范围,避免把城市消费效应泛化到所有独居者。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

原因与社会效果分段清楚,正负转换自然,结论准确对应。原因列举稍密但可跟随。

档位依据:良好衔接达到8分;段内自然层次未达9分。

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  • Now though, people desire self-fulfilment

    过去与现在对比清楚。

  • However, a drawback is that some people living alone

    由社会收益转向风险。

改进建议

  • 用收入选择与文化许可的关系组织原因,减少简单增补。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

affluent、self-fulfilment和revitalise贴题,资源广泛;outlet to talk表达稍不够精确。

档位依据:流畅广泛资源达到8分;少量搭配精度不足9分。

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  • helped to revitalise cities around the world

    自然表达城市活力。

  • may not have an outlet to talk about them.

    通常说someone to talk to或an outlet for emotions更清楚。

改进建议

  • 明确缺少倾诉对象,而非笼统outlet to talk。

语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9

关系、原因、比较、被动和省略结构准确多样,标点与主谓稳定。

档位依据:广泛结构与全篇准确符合9分。

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  • something not always possible in the past.

    省略关系结构准确。

  • more likely to live in central locations and socialise, spend money and participate

    比较与并列动词准确。

改进建议

  • 保持比较和并列成分的现有控制。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

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In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negatives effects on society?
There has been a tendency in many countries over recent years for more people of all ages to choose to live alone. This essay will discuss the reasons for this and explain why this can have both advantages and disadvantages for society. One reason for this trend is economic. People are generally more affluent than in the past, and this means that they can afford to make the choice to live alone, something not always possible in the past. In addition to this, there are also cultural factors. There used to be more pressure to marry young and think about having a family. Now though, people desire self-fulfilment, and will marry later or divorce if their marriage is not happy. Also, the developments in communication technology such as social media mean that people can live alone but still feel connected to others. I would argue that this development has positive and negative impacts on society. A positive impact is that those individuals who are young and single have helped to revitalise cities around the world, as they are more likely to live in central locations and socialise, spend money and participate in public life than those living with others. However, a drawback is that some people living alone who experience problems may not have an outlet to talk about them. This lack of social support could lead to more mental health problems in the general population, which would need to be dealt with by public health care services. To conclude, economic and cultural factors, and changes in communication have resulted in more people living alone, and, although this has benefits to society, there are also negative impacts.
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