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两个年龄段的俱乐部参与情况Clubs joined by people of two different age groups

Task 1 · Academic数据特征概括与比较城市与交通191 词AI 估评 8 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 7.75,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA8 / 9

六类活动都覆盖,年龄组主要偏好和均衡项目概述正确;数值及比较准确,音乐舞蹈虽无数字仍正确概括接近关系。

档位依据:充分准确的主次选择达到8档;最大与最小差距可更集中突出,尚未体现9档完全充分的比较。

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  • cycling is the most popular club among the 25-35 age bracket, with approximately 65 members, but only about 10 participants from the older group

    最高项和巨大年龄差准确。

  • Photography attracts almost equal interest – about 45 people from each age group are members.

    正确给出相同人数。

  • 题图证据

    已查看柱图:青年/老年依次为园艺25/55,摄影45/45,健身55/50,工艺60/20,音乐舞蹈约53/50,骑行65/10。

改进建议

  • 突出骑行差55人为最大年龄差,并给音乐舞蹈约53对50的支持。

连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9

概述后每项比较清楚,Conversely、While有效;但六类活动全在一个细节段,差距大和差距小项目穿插,分组可改进。

档位依据:逻辑关系和推进符合7档;大段分类未充分管理,未达8档。

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  • Conversely, gardening is clearly preferred by those aged 55-65

    对照青年骑行偏好有效。

  • While around 60 young people joined the arts & crafts club, only 20 of the older cohort did the same.

    在均衡项目之后返回大差距项目,分组稍松。

改进建议

  • 将骑行、园艺、工艺作为差异组,将摄影、健身、音乐舞蹈作为相近组。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

age bracket、cohort、balanced participation、split fairly evenly等词组灵活准确,重复受到良好控制。

档位依据:广泛自然的表达符合8档;substantial等程度词略笼统,尚非9档全篇精确。

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  • split fairly evenly between the younger and older groups

    分布表达自然精确。

  • though both age groups have substantial participation

    程度表达略笼统,缺具体规模。

改进建议

  • 用具体人数替代末句笼统的substantial participation。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

关系从句、对照从句、分词及让步结构准确,标点与主谓一致稳定。

档位依据:范围和准确性支持8档;频繁的同类比较框架仍可更灵活,未充分支持9档。

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  • with approximately 65 members, but only about 10 participants from the older group

    比较省略结构清楚。

  • the music and dance club draws slightly more young members than older ones, though both age groups have substantial participation

    比较与让步从句准确结合。

改进建议

  • 在保持准确性的基础上,用差额或倍数结构丰富比较。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

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The bar graph below represents data about the clubs joined by people of two different age groups at a leisure centre in a small city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Club preferences by age range
题目配图:IELTS Graph # 301 – Clubs joined by people of two different age groups
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The bar graph illustrates the number of people from two age groups (25–35 and 55–65) who joined six different clubs at a leisure centre in a small city. Overall, younger adults are more likely to join active and creative clubs like cycling and arts & crafts, while older adults tend to favour gardening. There is also a relatively balanced participation in photography and fitness between the two groups. In detail, cycling is the most popular club among the 25-35 age bracket, with approximately 65 members, but only about 10 participants from the older group. Conversely, gardening is clearly preferred by those aged 55-65, who number around 55, compared to roughly 25 younger members. Photography attracts almost equal interest – about 45 people from each age group are members. The fitness club is also similarly popular, with just over 100 members in total, split fairly evenly between the younger and older groups. While around 60 young people joined the arts & crafts club, only 20 of the older cohort did the same. Finally, the music and dance club draws slightly more young members than older ones, though both age groups have substantial participation.
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