广告有效性与广告回避Advertising Effectiveness and Consumer Avoidance
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任务回应 TR7 / 9
双方有相关解释与具体例子,倾向明确。但高广告投入等于有效的推断略概括,最关键的持续创新理由只在结论出现。
档位依据:主要部分得到展开达到7分;关键判断支持不充分,未达8分。
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companies would not advertise if it did not lead to sales.
为广告影响提供解释,但依赖概括推断。
advertising constantly evolves and finds creative ways to attract our attention
决定哪方更强的理由在结论才加入,未举例展开。
改进建议
- 将广告创新的例子放入主体段,说明它如何克服受众忽视,再据此权衡两方。
连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9
双方分段清楚,段内例子关系容易跟随。For instance与They argue的重复较显眼,结论新增理由使收束稍突兀。
档位依据:逻辑进展明确达到7分;衔接变化和结尾承接不足以达8分。
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However, some argue that we no longer pay attention to adverts. They argue that
转折明确,但重复引导语。
I think this is because advertising constantly evolves
结尾新增论证步骤,前文未准备。
改进建议
- 把创新理由前移,结尾仅综合已讨论的证据。
词汇资源 LR7 / 9
commercials、adverts、expenditure及accustomed等有一定变化,词义基本准确。food run偏口语,部分表达如seems to get purchased和case for the power较重复。
档位依据:足够灵活精确达到7分;语体和措辞自然度未充分达8分。
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otherwise the expenditure could not be justified.
经济语境搭配准确。
an opportunity for a food run.
语义可懂,但在正式分析中偏随意。
改进建议
- 将food run具体表达为取零食或准备食物,并压缩重复的广告力量概括。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
条件、宾语、关系及时间从句范围广,大多数准确;otherwise前缺分句标点,另有并列宾语前多余逗号。
档位依据:多数无误与广泛结构符合8分;偶发分句标点失误限制9分。
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companies would not advertise if it did not lead to sales.
假设条件准确。
they must be successful otherwise the expenditure could not be justified.
otherwise引入独立分句,前面需要句号或分号。
改进建议
- 在otherwise前使用分号或句号,检查独立分句边界。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some believe that commercials induce people to make purchases; others feel that advertisements have become so commonplace that we simply ignore them. This essay discusses both of these perspectives, and why I believe that the case for the power of advertising is stronger.
There are two main arguments to support the strong influence of advertising. The first is that whatever gets advertised heavily seems to get purchased the most. We can see that the most popular brands of products that are advertised on TV and the Internet also seem to be the ones people are purchasing. Another popular argument is that companies would not advertise if it did not lead to sales. Commercials are extremely expensive and as companies keep running them, they must be successful otherwise the expenditure could not be justified.
However, some argue that we no longer pay attention to adverts. They argue that people do not see commercials on television because they switch to other tasks whenever they appear. For instance, when there is a commercial break during a TV show people often use it as an opportunity for a food run. Moreover, when people cannot avoid advertising they just ignore it. For instance, people have become so accustomed to popups and marketing content on the right side of the computer screen that they tend to just ignore anything that occupies this space.
In conclusion, I believe that both sides of the argument have merits. However, the case for the power of advertising is stronger. I think this is because advertising constantly evolves and finds creative ways to attract our attention and convince us of the need to buy a product.
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