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可回收瓶的循环利用流程Returnable bottles: follow the loop and the exit

Task 1 · Academic流程与阶段说明环境与动物171 词AI 估评 8.5 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 8.25,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA9 / 9

主循环全部阶段、检验分流和损坏瓶退出准确,既报告回流又明确未给的回收后续,充分满足任务。

档位依据:全部关键要求完整且准确满足,达到9档。

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  • Inspection divides the flow

    准确识别关键分支。

  • The empty containers re-enter the cycle at collection

    回流位置准确。

  • 题图证据

    已看六框循环图:检验向上分出Damaged到Glass recycling,Reusable向右洗再向下装瓶,配送商店、客户使用归还后回收集。

改进建议

  • 可省去图上左右行的位置提示,内容已完整。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

主循环与损坏分支先概括后分段,remaining bottles及empty containers替代自然;lower row方向说明稍打断内容。

档位依据:良好组织和衔接达到8档;局部版面提示限制9档无痕流动。

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  • Those identified as damaged leave the main route at this point.

    承接检验结果清楚。

  • following the lower row from right to left

    版面方向提示对工序推进略显多余。

改进建议

  • 直接写配送与归还关系,省去版面方向。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

taken out of circulation、reusable、subsequent treatment等精确丰富,重复被有效控制。

档位依据:宽泛自然词汇达到8档;文中部分泛化route/sequence措辞仍可更直接,未稳达9档。

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  • taken out of circulation and sent for glass recycling

    退出循环语义准确。

  • The remaining bottles are washed

    自然概括合格部分。

改进建议

  • 用具体检验和清洗动作替代不必要的sequence/route说明。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

关系从句、被动、分词与before从句准确,时态稳定,复杂过程关系清楚。

档位依据:宽泛准确结构符合8档;最高档充分灵活性的证据尚未完全展开。

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  • a simplified system in which empty glass bottles are collected

    关系结构和被动正确。

  • before they can be washed and refilled again

    时间从句与情态被动准确。

改进建议

  • 保持被动和条件顺序准确,可合并最后的回收与复检句以更紧凑。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

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The diagram shows a simplified system for collecting and reusing glass bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Returnable glass bottle system
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The diagram illustrates a simplified system in which empty glass bottles are collected, prepared for reuse and returned to customers through shops. It also shows a separate route for bottles that are unsuitable for further use. Overall, there are six main stages in the return loop, from collection to customer use and return. Inspection divides the flow: reusable bottles continue towards washing and refilling, whereas damaged bottles are taken out of circulation and sent for glass recycling. At the beginning of the sequence shown, empty bottles are collected and then inspected. Those identified as damaged leave the main route at this point. The remaining bottles are washed before moving to the refilling stage. The diagram does not show the subsequent treatment of the glass sent for recycling. After refilling, the bottles are delivered to shops, following the lower row from right to left. Customers then use and return them. The empty containers re-enter the cycle at collection, so a further inspection takes place before they can be washed and refilled again.
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