再生纸的制作步骤Recycled paper: following the stages
AI 估评 8 分查看四维评分详情
四个维度等权计分,均值 8,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA8 / 9
八阶段、材料剔除和非循环特征完整准确;上排下排方向等版面说明占篇幅,主要工序可更集中。
档位依据:充分正确覆盖达到8档;少量版面描述与重复流程总结限制9档的恰当精炼。
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with plastic removed at this stage rather than carried forward with the paper
准确体现塑料在分拣时去除。
These last four operations appear along the lower row, proceeding from right to left
方向正确,但对生产实质解释帮助有限。
- 题图证据
已看八框箭头图,上排1至4从左向右,下排5至8从右向左;筛浆后下接压浆,最终包装,未显示返回收集。
改进建议
- 删减上下排位置说明,聚焦原料变纸浆再成纸张的变化。
连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9
前处理与后处理各段清楚,阶段顺序不混乱;引言和概述重复完整流程,First/then/next略显式。
档位依据:清楚逻辑与段落支持8档;重复及机械序列标记阻止9档。
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The wet pulp next proceeds to the pressing stage.
产物承接下一加工段清楚。
In the following step, the sheet is dried and subsequently cut to size.
顺序准确可跟随。
改进建议
- 精简引言第二句,以产物衔接代替部分阶段提示。
词汇资源 LR8 / 9
pulp treatment、screened、cut to size等准确自然,能区分浆和纸张,词汇适合简化流程。
档位依据:流畅精确符合8档;operations/stages/sequence多次重复,未达9档完全灵活。
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the resulting pulp is screened
专业动作准确。
the sheet is dried and subsequently cut to size
处理动作与对象自然。
改进建议
- 减少泛指stages与operations,直接写具体物料及动作。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
被动、with结构、关系从句和分词表达准确,多数句子无误。
档位依据:结构范围和控制支持8档;重复短被动句框架限制9档更充分灵活。
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with plastic removed at this stage
with复合结构正确。
which marks the end of the process shown
关系从句准确。
改进建议
- 将相邻的干燥和裁剪动作自然合并,保留阶段清楚性。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
页面明确为原创简化教学图和练习题;非实考题
The diagram shows a simplified process for making recycled paper sheets from used paper. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates a simplified method of producing recycled paper sheets from used paper. It presents a sequence of operations that prepares the collected material, turns it into pulp and then forms and finishes the paper before it is packed.
Overall, there are eight stages, beginning with the collection of used paper and ending with the packing of the finished sheets. The sequence moves from preparation and pulp treatment to pressing, drying and finishing. No return loop is shown in the diagram.
First, used paper is collected. It is then sorted, with plastic removed at this stage rather than carried forward with the paper. The sorted material is mixed with water in the third step. After this, the resulting pulp is screened, completing the first four stages shown across the top row.
The wet pulp next proceeds to the pressing stage. In the following step, the sheet is dried and subsequently cut to size. Finally, the cut sheets are packed, which marks the end of the process shown. These last four operations appear along the lower row, proceeding from right to left in the order indicated by the arrows.
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