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请朋友帮忙搬家Requesting moving help

Task 1 · General Training请求/申请/询问家庭与社会274 词AI 估评 8.5 分
AI 估评 8.5 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 8.5,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA8 / 9

搬家时间、需要的帮助和感谢方式均充分具体且体谅朋友;停车、衣着、举物高度及门码安排展开较多,主请求略显过度铺陈。

档位依据:8档充分满足成立;9档需更有分寸地筛选相关细节。

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  • three bulky items: a small desk, an armchair and the bicycle

    帮助范围明确。

  • there should be no heavy lifting above shoulder height

    与衣着和门码等细节累积,篇幅稍过。

改进建议

  • 保留时间、物品和搬运条件,压缩门码及高度说明。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

时间、搬运任务、地点条件和感谢安排分段合理,段内顺序易懂;第三段物流细节过密,结尾再次强调可拒绝略重复。

档位依据:8档易读和组织良好;9档需更紧凑推进。

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  • The old flat has visitor parking beside the rear entrance

    切入到达条件清楚。

  • honestly, no problem if it does not

    与首段不要改计划重复。

改进建议

  • 把体谅朋友时间的说明保留一处,精简第三段。

词汇资源 LR9 / 9

lend me a hand、bulky、straps、trolley、lunch is on me和make it up to you精确自然,语气亲切。

档位依据:任务内习惯表达与具体词汇灵活准确,符合9档。

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  • I have straps and a trolley

    搬运器材准确。

  • lunch is on me

    朋友间感谢自然。

改进建议

  • 保持具体物品词与自然邀助表达。

语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9

条件、时间、关系从句、完成时和将来安排准确,冒号列举及复杂句标点稳定。

档位依据:广泛结构与充分控制符合9档。

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  • Wear clothes that you do not mind getting dusty

    祈使句和关系从句准确。

  • as soon as the kitchen is organised

    未来时间从句时态正确。

改进建议

  • 维持时间条件结构的准确性,并通过删减内容压缩篇幅。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

来源声明虚构原创教学题,未称实考回忆。

You are moving to a new home and would like a friend to help you. Write a letter to your friend. Explain when you are moving, describe the help you need, and say how you will thank your friend.
Hi Sam, I finally have a moving date for the new flat: Saturday 12 October. I am collecting the keys at nine in the morning and hope to start moving at about ten. Would you be able to lend me a hand for an hour or two? Please do not change any important plans, as I can arrange another helper if that weekend is difficult. Most of my books and kitchen things will already be packed, so I mainly need help with three bulky items: a small desk, an armchair and the bicycle. I have hired a van and will do the driving. If you could help me carry those items down one flight of stairs and into the new place, the hardest part should be finished. I have straps and a trolley, so you will not need to bring any equipment. The old flat has visitor parking beside the rear entrance, and I will reserve a space for your car. The new building is only fifteen minutes away and has a lift. Wear clothes that you do not mind getting dusty, but there should be no heavy lifting above shoulder height. I will message you the door code on the morning of the move rather than putting it in this letter. I would really appreciate the help. Once the boxes are inside, lunch is on me at that Italian café you liked near the station. I will also make it up to you with dinner at the new flat as soon as the kitchen is organised. Let me know whether the time works, and honestly, no problem if it does not. Thanks, Alex
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