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申请为期三个月的工作实习Questions Before a Work Placement

Task 1 · General Training感谢/询问工作与经济173 词AI 估评 8 分
AI 估评 8 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 8,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA8 / 9

感谢充分,学习目标包括组织运作、协作和知识应用,问题具体实用;目标仍偏通用于任何行业。

档位依据:达到8档充分相关覆盖;9档尚可更贴合个人专业与实习岗位。

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  • a three-month work experience placement

    明确机会与期限。

  • my daily responsibilities, working hours, and the team I will be working with

    提出切实问题。

改进建议

  • 把一项技术学习目标与自己的专业相连。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

感谢、学习目标、问题与结束语顺序清楚,Specifically有效细化;Additionally两次显式连接略重复。

档位依据:阅读容易达到8档;9档需更不着痕迹的连接。

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  • Specifically, I am keen to gain insight

    从总体目标转入细节。

  • Additionally, are there any specific materials or documents

    再次使用相同衔接词。

改进建议

  • 把预习材料问题自然接在其他问题之后。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

placement、interpersonal skills和business objectives等正式词汇准确,内容表达流畅;starting this exciting opportunity搭配欠自然。

档位依据:灵活广泛资源符合8档;9档还需修正少量搭配。

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  • apply my academic knowledge to real-world scenarios

    知识应用表达准确。

  • starting this exciting opportunity

    通常开始placement或工作,而非opportunity。

改进建议

  • 结尾用starting the placement表达开始实习。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

条件礼貌句、嵌套疑问、关系从句和并列结构控制良好,几乎没有明显语法错误。

档位依据:达到8档准确而灵活;9档所需的全面变化尚较少,多个句子依赖I am eager或I hope框架。

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  • I would appreciate it if you could provide some information

    礼貌条件结构准确。

  • how different departments collaborate to achieve business objectives

    嵌入问句与目的不定式清楚。

改进建议

  • 可精简重复的愿望句,维持目前复杂句准确性。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

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You are soon going to spend three months doing work experience in an organisation. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you are going to do work experience. In your letter, thank the manager for the opportunity to work experience explain what you hope to learn from the work experience ask some questions about the work experience you are going to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for the opportunity to undertake a three-month work experience placement at your organisation. It is a privilege to gain practical experience in such a professional environment, and I am eager to contribute and learn as much as possible during my time with you. Through this placement, I hope to develop a deeper understanding of industry practices and enhance my technical and interpersonal skills. Specifically, I am keen to gain insight into how your organisation operates on a daily basis and how different departments collaborate to achieve business objectives. Additionally, I am eager to learn from experienced professionals and apply my academic knowledge to real-world scenarios. Before my placement begins, I would appreciate it if you could provide some information regarding my daily responsibilities, working hours, and the team I will be working with. Additionally, are there any specific materials or documents I should review beforehand? I look forward to your response and to starting this exciting opportunity. Yours faithfully, Ada Margaret
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