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海外居民赴英目的Main purposes of overseas residents’ visit to the UK

Task 1 · Academic数据时序变化概括文化与媒体202 词AI 估评 6.5 分
AI 估评 6.5 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 6.25,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA6 / 9

可辨度假最主要、总体访问增长,并给起点和2010附近数值;但多数线的后期走势和2016终值未报告,其他目的稳定被笼统增长概括,主要波动遗漏。

档位依据:相关概述尝试及数字支持6档;主特征展开与跨目的比较不足限制7档。

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  • the number grew over time

    总体可成立,但没有区分其他目的基本稳定。

  • the highest number of people in 2016 travelled to the United Kingdom to enjoy their vacations

    最高项正确,却缺终值及另外三线终点支持。

  • 题图证据

    已查看四折线:2000度假约930万、探亲友580万、商务730万、其他270万;2016约1380万、1150万、920万、290万。2001度假回落、2008后探亲友和商务下降,其他变化较小。

改进建议

  • 给2016四类终值,突出其他目的稳定以及商务、探亲友先回落后恢复。

连贯与衔接 CC6 / 9

引言后单一长细节段,先2000再模糊加入200万和十年后,时间连接不够清楚;末尾重复增长而未整理各线。

档位依据:整体主题可跟随符合6档;时间指向模糊和重复限制7档持续推进。

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  • Then 2 million holiday seekers were added to the list, and after a decade

    Then未说明年份,两百万变化也无明确时间范围。

  • During this time, around 6 million businessmen and 8.5 million ordinary travellers reached the country to meet relatives or friends.

    During this time指向不够明确,两个目的在一句中混杂。

改进建议

  • 明确每个数字年份,并把度假与探亲友、商务与其他目的分组。

词汇资源 LR6 / 9

有primary purposes、foremost、vacations等词,但holiday seekers反复、ordinary travellers与businessmen分类不精确,added to the list不适合数据变化。

档位依据:词汇基本足够符合6档;多处不自然或含混用词限制7档。

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  • holiday seekers were added to the list

    图无名单,应用holiday visits increased。

  • 6 million businessmen and 8.5 million ordinary travellers

    商务访客不限男性,ordinary也不是图中分类。

改进建议

  • 用holiday visits、business visitors、visits to friends or relatives保持原分类。

语法范围与准确性 GRA7 / 9

并列、名词性从句和比较结构多能准确使用,复杂句频繁;把商务访客与探亲目的共用句尾修饰造成局部歧义。

档位依据:整体语法控制和正确句支持7档;多主语修饰关系未稳定达到8档。

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  • the total number in 2016 was almost 10 million higher than that of 2000

    比较结构及that替代正确。

  • around 6 million businessmen and 8.5 million ordinary travellers reached the country to meet relatives or friends

    共同目的状语似乎同时修饰商务和探亲两组,使句义含混。

改进建议

  • 将商务与探亲的两条信息拆开,明确各自目的。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

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The graph below gives information about the main purposes of overseas residents’ visits to the UK between 2000 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
题目配图:IELTS graph # 281 – Main purposes of overseas residents’ visit to the UK
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The line graph illustrates the primary purposes for people to travel to the United Kingdom between 2000 and 2016. As can be seen, enjoying holidays, meeting friends and relatives, and business needs were the foremost reasons people from different countries went to the UK during the period, and the number grew over time. As the diagram suggests, more than 25 million people travelled to the UK in 2000. Among them, almost 10 million were holiday seekers, while roughly 7 million travelled for business purposes. Around 6 million travelled to the country to meet someone, while another 3 million went to the UK for numerous other purposes. Then 2 million holiday seekers were added to the list, and after a decade, nearly 12 million holiday seekers visited the UK. During this time, around 6 million businessmen and 8.5 million ordinary travellers reached the country to meet relatives or friends. It is interesting to notice that the total number in 2016 was almost 10 million higher than that of 2000, and the highest number of people in 2016 travelled to the United Kingdom to enjoy their vacations. Moreover, the number of people who went there to meet relatives or friends also grew significantly.
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