越南各行业就业比例Employment by sector in Viet Nam
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四个维度等权计分，均值 8，按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA8 / 9
各部门份额、排名逆转及倍数比较准确充分，概述清楚；工厂和建筑等行业举例不在图中，属于少量不必要延伸。
档位依据：充分覆盖并准确突出主要变化达到8档；删去图外行业组成才能更充分满足9档恰当性。
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Agriculture went from providing most jobs to providing the fewest
首尾排名概述准确。
one worker in three was now employed in factories, construction and similar activities
三分之一正确，但具体行业组成未由图示给出。
- 题图证据
已看两饼图：2000农业64.2%、工业12.1%、服务23.7%；2023农业27.0%、工业33.5%、服务39.5%。
改进建议
- 直接说明约三分之一在工业部门就业，避免新增图外分类。
连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9
按年份组织，第二年逐项对照首年，最后合计非农就业形成收束；长句集中农业、工业、倍数及例子，信息密度略高。
档位依据：清晰分组和指代支持8档；局部句子过载影响9档轻松推进。
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By 2023 the picture had been transformed.
顺畅转向末年。
Together, industry and services now employed almost three quarters of the workforce.
合并两类信息形成段落收束。
改进建议
- 把农业下降和工业增长拆为两句。
词汇资源 LR8 / 9
make-up、workforce、agricultural share、almost tripling等搭配准确，比例与排名表达丰富。
档位依据：词汇灵活自然符合8档；少量泛化the picture和similar activities未达到全篇高度精确的9档。
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the make-up of the workforce changed dramatically
自然概括就业结构变化。
less than half its earlier level
比例对比准确。
改进建议
- 用sectoral distribution代替泛指picture时仍以清楚为先。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
并列省略、while对照、过去完成时与so that从句均准确；最长句的多个层级略拥挤但无明显语法错误。
档位依据：多样结构及高准确性达到8档；复杂句的可读性仍可优化至9档。
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and industry for only 12.1%, or roughly one worker in eight
省略谓语和同位解释自然。
while industry grew faster than either of the other sectors
比较与对照结构准确。
改进建议
- 将so that之后的说明独立成短句，减少一个句子的嵌套。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
作文题目
依据来源图表文字整理的练习提示；非原站逐字题干，实际考试出处未核实
Employment in Viet Nam by sector, % of total employment, 2000 and 2023
2000
Agriculture 64.2%
Industry 12.1%
Services 23.7%
2023
Agriculture 27.0%
Industry 33.5%
Services 39.5%
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
题目材料说明：尚未取得可核对逐字措辞的原题；当前题目据来源图表内容整理。
The pie charts compare how employment in Viet Nam was divided between agriculture, industry and services in 2000 and 2023.
Overall, the make-up of the workforce changed dramatically. Agriculture went from providing most jobs to providing the fewest, while industry and services both expanded.
In 2000 almost two thirds of Vietnamese workers (64.2%) were employed in agriculture, more than in the other two sectors combined. Services accounted for less than a quarter of jobs, at 23.7%, and industry for only 12.1%, or roughly one worker in eight.
By 2023 the picture had been transformed. The agricultural share had fallen by 37 percentage points to 27%, less than half its earlier level, while industry grew faster than either of the other sectors, almost tripling its share to 33.5%, so that one worker in three was now employed in factories, construction and similar activities. Services expanded too, to 39.5%, and became the largest sector. Together, industry and services now employed almost three quarters of the workforce.
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