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2000与2020年家庭支出Household spending in 2000 and 2020

Task 1 · Academic数据时序变化概括家庭与社会150 词AI 估评 8.5 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 8.5,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA9 / 9

准确概述住房与食品最大项逆转、休闲上升、食品和其他下降;五类变化、交通最稳定、2020年最小项全部有正确数据支撑。

档位依据:任务要求完整恰当满足,几乎无内容疏漏,达到9档。

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  • housing took up a growing share of spending and replaced food as the largest category

    2000年食品30%高于住房28%,2020年住房36%高于食品22%。

  • Transport was the most stable category, rising by only one percentage point to 15%.

    交通14%升至15%,变化幅度五类中最小。

  • 题图证据

    来源表显示住房28→36、食品30→22、交通14→15、休闲10→14、其他18→13%。

  • 题图证据

    两饼图明确标为根据来源数据重绘、非原题图,扇区与表格数值一致。

改进建议

  • 保留五类变化与主要排名的精确对应。

连贯与衔接 CC9 / 9

概述后先对比最大两类,再合并其余三类;this order、among the smaller categories、remaining spending等承接自然,信息推进无需回看。

档位依据:分类、段落及衔接均娴熟,符合9档。

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  • Twenty years later this order had been reversed.

    this order紧扣上一句食品与住房的排名。

  • Among the smaller categories, the share spent on leisure increased from a tenth to 14%.

    自然从两大类过渡到其余类别。

改进建议

  • 继续按变化的重要性分组。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

took up、just ahead、reversed、a tenth、just over a fifth等表达自然且精确,足以灵活传达比例;未见明显错误。

档位依据:词汇宽而准确达到8档;样本较短,9档的全范围高级控制尚未充分显示。

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  • just ahead of housing at 28%

    准确传达食品30%仅略高于住房28%。

  • food had dropped to 22%, or just over a fifth

    对百分比作自然准确的分数改述。

改进建议

  • 保持比例词与具体数据的对应。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

时间对照、被动、whereas从句和分词结果句均准确,标点清楚;多数句子无误。

档位依据:多种结构灵活准确达到8档;不足以仅凭这篇短文确认9档全程最广范围的完全控制。

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  • whereas food had dropped to 22%, or just over a fifth

    对照从句和过去完成时准确。

  • making it the smallest category in 2020

    结果分词与先行事实关系明确。

改进建议

  • 继续用从句和分词明确表达排名变化。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

页面明示原创练习题;非实考题

The charts below show how households in one country spent their income in 2000 and 2020. Category | 2000 | 2020 Housing | 28% | 36% Food | 30% | 22% Transport | 14% | 15% Leisure | 10% | 14% Other | 18% | 13%
Task 1 Sample 3 — household spending in 2000 and 2020
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Task 1 Sample 3 — household spending in 2000 and 2020;根据来源数据重绘的双饼图,非原题图
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题目材料说明:来源实际提供数据表;饼图按同一数值重绘,原题图形形式待核。

The two pie charts compare the way households in a particular country divided their spending among five categories in 2000 and in 2020. Overall, housing took up a growing share of spending and replaced food as the largest category. Leisure also became more important, while the proportion spent on food and on other items fell. In 2000, food was the biggest expense, at 30% of the total, just ahead of housing at 28%. Twenty years later this order had been reversed. Housing accounted for more than a third of spending, at 36%, whereas food had dropped to 22%, or just over a fifth. Among the smaller categories, the share spent on leisure increased from a tenth to 14%. Transport was the most stable category, rising by only one percentage point to 15%. The remaining spending, grouped as other, declined from 18% to 13%, making it the smallest category in 2020.
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