解释俱乐部器材迟还Late club equipment return
AI 估评 9 分查看四维评分详情
四个维度等权计分,均值 9,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA9 / 9
道歉承认对方额外工作,迟还原因具体且承担责任,归还含配件、时间和备用方案,预防措施对应错误原因。
档位依据:全部要求充分、相关且恰当,符合9档。
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had to arrange another speaker at short notice
承认造成的具体影响。
enter a reminder for the previous evening as well as the return day
预防办法有针对性。
改进建议
- 保持道歉、实际补救和预防措施彼此对应。
连贯与衔接 CC9 / 9
影响、原因、归还安排和预防分段清楚,时间脉络一致,条件分支自然,不需要读者补足信息。
档位依据:组织和衔接熟练达到9档。
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only noticed the error this morning
与当天归还安排相接。
If you need it earlier
自然引出备用时间。
改进建议
- 维持归还安排按首选与备用方案推进的方式。
词汇资源 LR9 / 9
at short notice、relying on、unattended和carrying case精确自然,责任与歉意表达得体。
档位依据:词汇在任务范围内灵活准确,符合9档。
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relying on the incorrect reminder
准确说明失误机制。
speaker, charging lead and carrying case
归还物品表述具体。
改进建议
- 继续明确列出设备与配件,保持诚恳措辞。
语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9
过去完成背景、被动、情态完成式、条件及间接问句准确,长短句调配灵活。
档位依据:充分结构与准确控制符合9档。
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I should have confirmed the arrangement
准确表达对过去行为的反思。
please let me know whether that time is convenient
间接疑问语序准确。
改进建议
- 保持过去责任与未来安排的时态区分。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
来源声明虚构原创教学题,未称实考回忆。
You borrowed a portable speaker from a local club and did not return it on the agreed day. You know the club coordinator through regular volunteering. Write a letter to the coordinator. Apologise and explain the delay, describe how you will return the equipment, and say how you will avoid a similar problem.
Dear Ms Chen,
I am writing to apologise for not returning the club’s portable speaker yesterday, as we agreed. I realise that you were expecting to have it available for the evening rehearsal and had to arrange another speaker at short notice. I am sorry for creating that extra work.
When I entered the return date in my calendar, I mistakenly recorded Tuesday rather than Monday. I did not check it against our message before the weekend and only noticed the error this morning. The speaker has been safely stored at home, but I should have confirmed the arrangement instead of relying on the incorrect reminder.
I can bring the speaker, charging lead and carrying case to the club today at 5.30 p.m. I understand that you are usually there preparing for the Tuesday group, but please let me know whether that time is convenient. If you need it earlier, I can arrange to deliver it during my lunch break to a place you specify. I will not leave the equipment unattended outside the building.
In future, I will check the return date with you when collecting any equipment and enter a reminder for the previous evening as well as the return day. Thank you for lending me the speaker, and please accept my apologies again for the inconvenience.
Kind regards,
Alex Morgan
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