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人类学毕业生的去向What Anthropology graduates did after finishing undergraduate degree

Task 1 · Academic数据特征概括与比较科技与科学212 词AI 估评 7.5 分
AI 估评 7.5 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 7.5,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA6 / 9

涵盖就业和工资两个部分,概述方向合理;但失业12%错写8%,兼职15%被模糊弱化,私企35%的工资档被称为most,且未充分突出政府与顾问的共同高收入分布。

档位依据:相关概述和多项数据支持6档;错误数值及量词使内容未达7档的整体准确。

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  • graduates were unemployed, at roughly 8%

    失业实际12%,8%属于未知或全职读研。

  • with most salaries falling between $50,000 and $74,999

    该档仅35%,为最大单项而非大多数。

  • 题图证据

    已查看去向饼图:全职52%、兼职15%、兼职兼读研5%、全职读研8%、失业12%、未知8%。

  • 题图证据

    已查看薪资表:从25000至49999、50000至74999、75000至99999、100000以上四档,顾问为5/15/40/40%,政府5/15/30/50%,私企10/35/25/30%。

改进建议

  • 纠正失业为12%,把私企35%称为最大单个工资组;概述突出政府和顾问的高收入份额。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

引言、概述、去向和工资四段明确;分类后按行业比较,指代与转折流畅。

档位依据:逻辑和段落管理符合8档;末段行业逐项方式较常规,9档的更娴熟综合比较尚未充分展示。

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  • The salary data from the table reveal clear differences between employment categories after five years.

    清楚转入第二资料。

  • A similar pattern is evident among those in government roles

    以相似关系连接两个行业。

改进建议

  • 把政府和顾问的共同分布合并,再集中对比私企。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

career paths、income bracket、employment categories等自然准确,工资范围表达灵活;substantial salaries等概述稍笼统。

档位依据:宽泛流畅的词汇支持8档;个别程度词不够具体,未达到9档精度。

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  • broken down by employment type and salary range

    分类词组自然。

  • earned substantial salaries

    程度笼统,应由收入门槛限定。

改进建议

  • 用at least $75,000明确所谓高收入,并区分largest group与most。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

过去经历与表格描述的时态选择合理,关系从句、分词和并列结构稳定,多数句无误。

档位依据:句式广泛且准确符合8档;重复的行业主句模式仍可更灵活以接近9档。

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  • while the table provides information about the salaries earned by those employed after five years

    对照从句和过去分词修饰准确。

  • where nearly half were paid at least $100,000

    关系从句及被动语态正确,数值精度另归任务。

改进建议

  • 可用两行业合并的对比句减少相似主句结构。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

来源页题目,与同页选定答案配套;未核为实际考试真题

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Destinations of Anthropology graduates (from one university) Salaries of Anthropology graduates (after 5 years’ work)
题目配图:IELTS Graph # 356 – What Anthropology graduates did after finishing undergraduate degree
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题目配图:IELTS Graph # 356 – What Anthropology graduates did after finishing undergraduate degree
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The bar chart illustrates the career paths of Anthropology graduates from a particular university after completing their undergraduate studies, while the table provides information about the salaries earned by those employed after five years, broken down by employment type and salary range. Overall, a large proportion of graduates pursued full-time employment, and only a small minority were unemployed. After five years, a large portion of those who were working earned substantial salaries. According to the pie chart, just over half of all Anthropology graduates secured full-time work, making it the most common outcome. Around 13% continued with postgraduate studies, either full-time or part-time. By contrast, only a small percentage of graduates were unemployed, at roughly 8%, and similarly small proportions took on part-time work or unspecified activities. The salary data from the table reveal clear differences between employment categories after five years. In freelance consultancy, the majority of anthropologists earned over $75,000, and 40% of them reached the highest income bracket of $100,000 or more. A similar pattern is evident among those in government roles, where nearly half were paid at least $100,000. Meanwhile, those in private companies generally earned less, with most salaries falling between $50,000 and $74,999, and just 30% reaching the top pay bracket.
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