说明抵达路线与来访安排Arrival directions and visit arrangements
AI 估评 8.5 分查看四维评分详情
四个维度等权计分,均值 8.5,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA9 / 9
不能接机的理由充分,交通路线和入门办法实用,活动有日期和内容,朋友语气自然。
档位依据:全部要求充分恰当满足,符合9档。
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two people in my team are away that week
解释不能请假。
My neighbour Mrs Lee in flat 3 has a spare key
到达后的安排明确。
改进建议
- 保持路线、入门和活动安排的完整性。
连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9
原因、路线和计划分段合理,路线按实际行动顺序展开;Sunday is free后直接要求带步行鞋,关系略隐含。
档位依据:清楚顺畅符合8档;9档可更明确最后一天与步行用品的联系。
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Get off at the library, and my building is the white one directly opposite.
路线顺序清楚。
Sunday is free, so bring your walking shoes.
步行计划只隐含在用品建议中。
改进建议
- 简要说明星期日可能步行游览,再建议带鞋。
词汇资源 LR8 / 9
stuck at work、spare key、ring her bell和boat trip自然,方向词准确;活动描写相对简略,精细词汇变化稍少。
档位依据:广泛而适切的资源达到8档;9档可更精确描绘活动选择。
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the stop outside the main entrance
方向用词准确。
a boat trip round the bay
活动表达自然。
改进建议
- 可用一个具体目的地补充步行活动,而不必增加夸张形容词。
语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9
时态、并列转折、关系从句、祈使指令及原因从句灵活准确,语法随交际功能变化。
档位依据:结构和标点充分受控,符合9档。
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I did ask for the day off, but
强调与转折准确。
Have a rest when you get in, because I’ve got plenty planned.
时间与原因从句配合自然。
改进建议
- 保持清晰祈使句与解释从句结合的指路方式。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
IELTS Lab教学用情境练习;未证为官方IELTS或实考题。
A friend from another country is coming to stay with you next month. You will be at work when your friend arrives.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
explain why you cannot meet your friend at the airport
give directions to your home
say what you have planned for the visit
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sam,
Dear Sam,
I’m so glad you’re finally coming! There’s one small problem, though. Your flight lands at two on Thursday afternoon and I’ll be stuck at work until six, so I won’t be able to meet you at the airport. I did ask for the day off, but two people in my team are away that week.
Getting to my flat is easy. Take the express train from the airport to Central Station, which takes about half an hour, then the number 12 bus from the stop outside the main entrance. Get off at the library, and my building is the white one directly opposite. My neighbour Mrs Lee in flat 3 has a spare key and is expecting you, so just ring her bell.
Have a rest when you get in, because I’ve got plenty planned. On Friday evening we’re going to the night market, and on Saturday I’ve booked a boat trip round the bay. Sunday is free, so bring your walking shoes.
See you on Thursday evening!
Best wishes,
Maya
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