小镇公共图书馆的使用情况Information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont
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四个维度等权计分，均值 8，按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA8 / 9
三个资料均充分概括，主要份额和借阅变化准确，小项合理合并；book lending将包含DVD等资料的总借阅窄化，2012也在下降但仅强调2013。
档位依据：关键选择和总体准确性达到8档；少量范围与阶段简化限制9档。
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adult fiction and children’s fiction were equally popular, each contributing 38% of total loans
两类相同最大份额准确。
Although there was a slight decline in 2013
下降实际上从2012开始，可更完整界定。
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已查看整张复合图：成员儿童22、18至64岁51、13至17岁15、65以上12%；儿童小说38、儿童非小说6、儿童DVD1、青少年2、成人小说38、成人非小说13、成人音频书2%；总借阅约16000升至21500，2011小峰后2012至2013回落。
改进建议
- 用total lending而非book loans概括全部材料，注明2012至2013连续回落。
连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9
概述覆盖三资料，随后年龄、类别、时间各一段，逻辑层次清楚，阅读轻松。
档位依据：充分恰当分段和衔接支持8档；段首引导较显式，尚非9档几乎无痕的组织。
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In terms of membership
准确开启年龄分布。
Looking at borrowing patterns
明确转入材料类别。
改进建议
- 可用成年成员和小说主导的直接联系过渡，减少机械的图项提示。
词汇资源 LR8 / 9
predominantly、accounted for、representing、minor fluctuations等词自然，范围宽；borrowing records及book lending口径稍笼统。
档位依据：流畅灵活词汇符合8档；少量量词和对象精度限制9档。
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predominantly used by adults aged between 18 and 64
准确概括主要人群。
minor shares of borrowing records
更自然为small shares of total loans。
改进建议
- 统一用loans表借阅次数，避免把材料范围缩为书籍。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
分词、让步从句及并列对比结构准确，复杂句控制稳定。
档位依据：大多数句无误且句式丰富符合8档；多个分词列举框架仍可更灵活以达9档。
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Children made up the second-largest group at nearly one-quarter, followed by young adults aged 13–17 at 15%.
被动分词及年龄修饰正确。
reaching a peak of about 22,000 loans in 2016
结果分词准确承接增长。
改进建议
- 在保持准确性的同时可合并相近类别，用比较句减少列举感。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
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The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The charts present information about a library in Little Chalfont town, including the age distribution of its members in 2016, the types of materials borrowed in that year, and the total number of loans between 2007 and 2016.
Overall, the library was predominantly used by adults aged between 18 and 64, fiction books accounted for the largest share of loans, and the total number of borrowings showed a general upward trend over the decade, despite some minor fluctuations.
In terms of membership, adults aged from 18 to 64 formed the majority, representing more than half of the total users. Children made up the second-largest group at nearly one-quarter, followed by young adults aged 13–17 at 15%. The smallest proportion consisted of those aged 65 and over, at just over one-tenth of total users.
Looking at borrowing patterns, adult fiction and children’s fiction were equally popular, each contributing 38% of total loans. Adult non-fiction accounted for a smaller but still notable share of 13%. The remaining categories (i.e. children’s non-fiction and DVDs, young adults, and adult audiobooks) were relatively less popular with minor shares of borrowing records.
Regarding the overall book lending activity of this library, the number of loans rose from approximately 16,000 in 2007 to over 21,000 in 2011. Although there was a slight decline in 2013, the book loans increased gradually afterwards, reaching a peak of about 22,000 loans in 2016.
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