投诉洗碗机故障Dishwasher fault
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四个维度等权计分,均值 8.25,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA8 / 9
购买、故障及补救诉求具体充分,售后与生活影响有关;已约上门但失约的情节突然出现,与前文只承诺联系之间交代不足。
档位依据:8档充分覆盖成立;9档需更连贯准确地交代预约经过。
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displayed an F4 error code
故障可定位。
I also took an afternoon off work for the first appointment, which was not kept.
实际损失具体,但预约未在前文交代。
改进建议
- 交代第一次上门预约如何确定,再说明失约。
连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9
日期顺序和问题至后果的推进清楚,therefore引出请求;预约信息加入略突然。
档位依据:8档组织良好;9档需消除这一局部信息跳跃。
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on 10 and 12 September
联系时间线明确。
As a result my household has been without a working dishwasher
从故障发展到影响。
改进建议
- 把预约安排放在电话联系段,影响段再写误工。
词汇资源 LR8 / 9
troubleshooting、mid-cycle、standing water和written confirmation准确,投诉词汇自然;drum用于洗碗机内部部件不够精确。
档位依据:广泛准确资源达到8档;9档需更准确的器件术语。
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followed the troubleshooting steps in the manual
排障表达准确。
standing water in the drum
洗碗机通常用tub等指内部容器。
改进建议
- 用准确的内部水槽或机底描述代替drum。
语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9
关系从句、完成时、被动、并列及宾语补足语准确,句子长短控制得当,时间表达稳定。
档位依据:充分的语法与标点控制符合9档。
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which has failed within a week of installation
完成时关系从句准确。
I would therefore like the machine replaced rather than repaired
宾语与过去分词补足结构准确。
改进建议
- 保持复杂请求和日期叙述的准确性。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
作文题目
原创练习题;非实考题
Prompt: You recently bought a piece of equipment that stopped working within a week. Write to the shop. Say what you bought and when, explain what is wrong, and say what you would like them to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about a dishwasher I purchased from your Riverside branch on 2 September, order number 48117, which has failed within a week of installation.
The machine was delivered and installed on 4 September and worked normally for five days. Since 9 September it has stopped mid-cycle and displayed an F4 error code, leaving standing water in the drum.
I followed the troubleshooting steps in the manual and telephoned your service line twice, on 10 and 12 September, but on both occasions I was told a technician would contact me and no one has done so.
As a result my household has been without a working dishwasher for over a week, and the standing water has begun to smell. I also took an afternoon off work for the first appointment, which was not kept.
I would therefore like the machine replaced rather than repaired, and I expect the replacement to be delivered within ten working days. I would also appreciate written confirmation of the delivery date.
Yours faithfully,
Daniel Okonjo
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