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投诉洗碗机故障Dishwasher fault

Task 1 · General Training投诉/问题处理工作与经济177 词AI 估评 8.5 分
AI 估评 8.5 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 8.25,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA8 / 9

购买、故障及补救诉求具体充分,售后与生活影响有关;已约上门但失约的情节突然出现,与前文只承诺联系之间交代不足。

档位依据:8档充分覆盖成立;9档需更连贯准确地交代预约经过。

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  • displayed an F4 error code

    故障可定位。

  • I also took an afternoon off work for the first appointment, which was not kept.

    实际损失具体,但预约未在前文交代。

改进建议

  • 交代第一次上门预约如何确定,再说明失约。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

日期顺序和问题至后果的推进清楚,therefore引出请求;预约信息加入略突然。

档位依据:8档组织良好;9档需消除这一局部信息跳跃。

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  • on 10 and 12 September

    联系时间线明确。

  • As a result my household has been without a working dishwasher

    从故障发展到影响。

改进建议

  • 把预约安排放在电话联系段,影响段再写误工。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

troubleshooting、mid-cycle、standing water和written confirmation准确,投诉词汇自然;drum用于洗碗机内部部件不够精确。

档位依据:广泛准确资源达到8档;9档需更准确的器件术语。

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  • followed the troubleshooting steps in the manual

    排障表达准确。

  • standing water in the drum

    洗碗机通常用tub等指内部容器。

改进建议

  • 用准确的内部水槽或机底描述代替drum。

语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9

关系从句、完成时、被动、并列及宾语补足语准确,句子长短控制得当,时间表达稳定。

档位依据:充分的语法与标点控制符合9档。

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  • which has failed within a week of installation

    完成时关系从句准确。

  • I would therefore like the machine replaced rather than repaired

    宾语与过去分词补足结构准确。

改进建议

  • 保持复杂请求和日期叙述的准确性。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

原创练习题;非实考题

Prompt: You recently bought a piece of equipment that stopped working within a week. Write to the shop. Say what you bought and when, explain what is wrong, and say what you would like them to do.
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about a dishwasher I purchased from your Riverside branch on 2 September, order number 48117, which has failed within a week of installation. The machine was delivered and installed on 4 September and worked normally for five days. Since 9 September it has stopped mid-cycle and displayed an F4 error code, leaving standing water in the drum. I followed the troubleshooting steps in the manual and telephoned your service line twice, on 10 and 12 September, but on both occasions I was told a technician would contact me and no one has done so. As a result my household has been without a working dishwasher for over a week, and the standing water has begun to smell. I also took an afternoon off work for the first appointment, which was not kept. I would therefore like the machine replaced rather than repaired, and I expect the replacement to be delivered within ten working days. I would also appreciate written confirmation of the delivery date. Yours faithfully, Daniel Okonjo
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