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为国际美食活动推荐本国菜肴Suggesting a Dish for an International Food Event

Task 1 · General Training建议/反馈/主动提供帮助健康与生活178 词AI 估评 8.5 分
AI 估评 8.5 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 8.25,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA9 / 9

制作意愿、菜品构成及列入活动的理由全部充分展开。介绍产地、吃法与可选配料,并说明文化价值和受欢迎的原因,语气适合社团组织者。

档位依据:各项要求充分、相关且恰当满足,符合9档。

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  • I would love to prepare a traditional dish from my country called "poutine"

    明确供餐意愿及国家。

  • it represents Canadian

    从文化代表性解释加入理由。

改进建议

  • 保持菜品描述和活动价值之间的联系。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

贡献意愿、食物介绍和入选理由分段明确,it与its回指清楚;开头感谢与写信目的铺垫略长。

档位依据:顺畅排序符合8档;9档可进一步精简开头。

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  • Poutine is a beloved Canadian dish

    开始集中介绍菜品。

  • Moreover, its hearty and indulgent nature

    继续补充吸引力,指代明确。

改进建议

  • 压缩开头重复的活动介绍。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

crispy、curds、smothered、savoury与crowd-pleaser描写具体自然,烹饪词汇范围广;Here, I am writing略僵硬。

档位依据:熟练使用少见及习惯表达达到8档;9档需全篇更自然的措辞。

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  • crispy French fries topped with rich cheese curds and smothered in savoury brown gravy

    细致准确的菜品描写。

  • Here, I am writing to express my interest

    书信起始措辞稍生硬。

改进建议

  • 删除Here并直接说明贡献意愿。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

分词、关系从句、被动和原因结构准确,标点稳定;复杂结构范围足够但句式展开较常规。

档位依据:多数无误且结构丰富,符合8档;9档充分灵活性尚未完全体现。

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  • Originating from Quebec, it has become

    分词修饰与主句一致。

  • a crowd-pleaser that I am sure many attendees would love to try

    嵌入关系从句准确。

改进建议

  • 保持分词与关系从句的准确控制,精简重复主句框架。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

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You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter, offer to make a popular dish from your country describe what this dish is explain why it should be included in the event Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Luis,
Dear Luis, Thank you very much for your initiative to organise this fabulous event to celebrate famous food from all corners of the world. Here, I am writing to express my interest in contributing to the upcoming international food event. As a proud Canadian, I would love to prepare a traditional dish from my country called "poutine" for everyone to enjoy. Poutine is a beloved Canadian dish that consists of crispy French fries topped with rich cheese curds and smothered in savoury brown gravy. Originating from Quebec, it has become an iconic comfort food across Canada and is enjoyed by people of all backgrounds. Some variations even include additional toppings such as smoked meat. I believe poutine would be a great addition to the event because it represents Canadian cuisine’s fusion of simple ingredients with bold flavours. Moreover, its hearty and indulgent nature makes it a crowd-pleaser that I am sure many attendees would love to try. Please let me know if I can go ahead with this contribution. Looking forward to your response. Yours sincerely, Emma Johnson
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