四国在2010至2015年的国内生产总值GDP in four countries between 2010 and 2015
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四个维度等权计分，均值 6.75，按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。
任务完成度 TA6 / 9
概述美国规模最大和中国增速突出正确；后两国缺少终值支持，日本先升后降未呈现，中国终值写接近12000偏高，英国近乎不变过于简化。
档位依据：相关概述和若干关键数据满足6档；后两条线展开不足及数值偏差限制7档。
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reaching almost 12,000 billion USD in 2015
图末值约11000，近似偏高。
GDP in Japan actually declined while it remained almost the same in the UK
略去日本前段上升和英国小幅增加，且没有终值。
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已查看折线：美国约15000至18000；中国约6000至11000；日本约5600，2011至2012约6200后降至4400；英国约2400至2800，2014约3000。
改进建议
- 补充日本峰值及终值、英国终值，并将中国末值改为约11000。
连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9
起点与后续变化分段清楚，比较关系可跟随；美国最高重复三次，末两国被压缩在一句中。
档位依据：清楚整体推进支持7档；重复及展开不均衡限制8档。
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The USA’s GDP was higher than that of any other country between 2010 and 2015.
重复引言与前段的最高信息。
However, the GDP growth in China was most remarkable
用转折引入增长速度比较。
改进建议
- 将规模与增速比较集中一次，给日本和英国更平衡的细节段。
词汇资源 LR7 / 9
delineates、steadily、almost doubled等表达有变化；somewhat two thousand搭配不自然，remarkable重复而笼统。
档位依据：范围和清楚意义支持7档；量值近似表达不够精确自然，未达8档。
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which was somewhat two thousand and five hundred billion USD
somewhat不能自然修饰这个近似数量。
as it almost doubled in 5 years
倍数表达自然简练。
改进建议
- 用approximately修饰数值，以增幅数据替代重复remarkable。
语法范围与准确性 GRA7 / 9
关系从句、比较及原因从句基本准确；this year回指过去不自然，数字1,8000的标点有误。
档位依据：正确句频繁符合7档；标点和时间指示细节限制8档。
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Japan almost reached the GDP of China this year
过去叙述应为that year。
over 1,8000 billion dollars
数字分隔应写18,000。
改进建议
- 统一过去时间指代，并检查千位分隔符。
评分日期：2026-10-23 · 评分规则：IELTS 写作公开评分标准（2023 年 5 月版）
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The graph below shows the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in four selected countries between 2010 and 2015.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph compares the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in four countries and delineates how GDP in these countries changed between 2010 and 2015. The GDP is measured in USD (in billions of dollars). As can be seen, the USA had the largest GDP, and in China, the GDP growth was remarkable.
The diagram outlines that the USA had the highest GDP in 2010, which was exactly fifteen thousand billion dollars. With roughly six thousand billion USD, China had the second largest GDP, while Japan almost reached the GDP of China this year. The UK had the lowest GDP in 2010, which was somewhat two thousand and five hundred billion USD.
It is worth noticing that GDP in the USA steadily grew and reached over 1,8000 billion dollars in 2015, 3000 billion dollars higher than that of 2010. The USA’s GDP was higher than that of any other country between 2010 and 2015. However, the GDP growth in China was most remarkable as it almost doubled in 5 years, reaching almost 12,000 billion USD in 2015. As an exception, GDP in Japan actually declined while it remained almost the same in the UK over the five years.
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