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咨询租用公共礼堂Enquiry about hiring public hall

Task 1 · General Training请求/申请/询问家庭与社会227 词AI 估评 9 分
AI 估评 9 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 9,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA9 / 9

活动目的、设施需求及档期费用问题全面具体,设备、餐饮和清场要求相关,礼貌语气一致。

档位依据:所有要求充分满足,符合9档。

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  • our annual exhibition

    目的明确。

  • the hall charge, equipment fees, refundable deposit and any cleaning requirement

    费用问询具体。

改进建议

  • 保持数量、时段及费用项目的准确交代。

连贯与衔接 CC9 / 9

活动概况、功能设施、报价规则和看场安排依次展开,therefore和either date自然回接,信息多而不乱。

档位依据:组织与衔接熟练达到9档。

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  • We therefore need twenty display panels

    设施由展览用途推出。

  • before making the booking

    看场与订场次序明确。

改进建议

  • 维持设施要求与活动用途相连的组织。

词汇资源 LR9 / 9

portable display boards、step-free entry、itemised cost和refundable deposit准确专业,自然表达场地需求。

档位依据:丰富词汇在任务内精确灵活,符合9档。

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  • Step-free entry and an accessible toilet

    无障碍需求准确。

  • an itemised cost

    报价形式准确。

改进建议

  • 继续用具体设施和费用名称。

语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9

关系从句、间接询问、条件句及并列清单准确,长句中的时间和目的结构清晰。

档位依据:结构范围与控制充分达到9档。

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  • the latest time by which the building must be cleared

    介词关系结构与被动准确。

  • If one of the dates is suitable

    条件安排自然。

改进建议

  • 保持复杂时间询问和清单的准确控制。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

来源声明虚构原创教学题,未称实考回忆。

You would like to hire a public hall for a local club. Write a letter to the venue manager. Explain the purpose of the event, describe the facilities you need, and ask about availability and cost.
Dear Venue Manager, I am writing on behalf of Brookton Photography Club to enquire about hiring the Riverside Public Hall for our annual exhibition. We expect approximately eighty visitors on either Saturday 12 or Saturday 19 November, and would need access from 9 a.m. until 7 p.m. for setup, viewing and removal. The main room would hold thirty framed photographs on portable display boards, with a short presentation for seated visitors at 3 p.m. We therefore need twenty display panels, sixty chairs, two tables and access to a power socket for a projector. Step-free entry and an accessible toilet are essential. We would also like permission to serve tea and packaged biscuits in the side room, without cooking. Could you confirm whether either date is available and whether the listed equipment is included in the basic hire? Please provide an itemised cost showing the hall charge, equipment fees, refundable deposit and any cleaning requirement. I would also be grateful for your rules on attaching labels to display boards and the latest time by which the building must be cleared. If one of the dates is suitable, I would be pleased to visit the hall before making the booking. Please send the information to the email address on this letter or telephone me on weekday afternoons. Thank you for your assistance. Yours faithfully, Alex Morgan
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