收入是否应纳税Paying Taxes
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任务回应 TR7 / 9
立场明确,个人需求和税收服务有相关解释;税收稳定经济与偿债的作用仅概述。
档位依据:主要观点有扩展达到7分;部分支持不足8分。
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roads, bridges, public hospitals, parks
具体说明公共支出用途。
The same tax money helps the country’s economy to be stable.
稳定机制未解释。
改进建议
- 说明公共设施如何维持生产和基本生活,把稳定经济的判断具体化。
连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9
个人理由、公共理由和结论分段清楚;部分句子重复money和public services,衔接变化有限。
档位依据:清楚整体推进达到7分;重复限制8分。
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Nevertheless, citizens should be obliged
明确转向作者立场。
public services are things such as
后面再次出现public services,信息组织冗余。
改进建议
- 把服务列举与其社会效果连成因果,减少重复概括。
词汇资源 LR6 / 9
基本意思清楚,accumulate和deduction有一定变化;整体依赖money、things、people,部分搭配不自然。
档位依据:词汇总体够用符合6分;灵活精确性不足7分。
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Money is everything in today’s world.
泛化表达,不能具体说明财政取舍。
comfortable livelihoods.
通常说decent living standards,更自然。
改进建议
- 用income、public funding及living standards准确区分资金与生活水平。
语法范围与准确性 GRA7 / 9
关系、条件与比较句多样,无误句常见;冠词和部分表述控制不够自然。
档位依据:总体良好达到7分;准确灵活程度不足8分。
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The more that people have to invest, the more they believe they can accumulate
比较关联结构准确。
offer them the public services all over the country.
泛指公共服务通常不加the。
改进建议
- 删去泛指public services前多余定冠词,并检查长句限定关系。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
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Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People work hard and earn money which ideally they would like to retain for themselves. However, a significant portion of this usually has to be given to the state. In my view, it is right that people pay their fair share of taxes.
Money is everything in today’s world. This is because money is used to buy all the necessities such as food, water, and shelter. Money is also used to help a family’s children in the form of school fees and other activities. In addition to this, people do not only need money to cater for their necessities, but also for future investments. The more that people have to invest, the more they believe they can accumulate in the long term. As a result, many are reluctant to lose some of their income through the deduction of tax.
Nevertheless, citizens should be obliged to pay taxes to the government for a number of reasons. They should accept that the taxes they pay help the government offer them the public services all over the country. These public services are things such as the construction of roads, bridges, public hospitals, parks and other public services. The same tax money helps the country’s economy to be stable. Through taxes, the government can also pay off its debts. In short, money received through taxes is a way of ensuring that people have comfortable livelihoods.
In conclusion, even though many people think that they should not pay taxes, that money is useful to the stability of any country. Therefore, people should not avoid paying taxes as it may affect the country’s economy and services that it provides.
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