大学体育中心改建前后The layout of a university’s sports centre before and after redevelopment
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任务完成度 TA8 / 9
概述扩建和新增服务正确,主要布局及保留接待区准确;遗漏东南新更衣室,对原更衣室及座位保留未充分强调。
档位依据:关键特征充分覆盖达到8档;小项遗漏限制9档完整性。
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the outdoor courts will disappear and be replaced by indoor structures
整体变化准确。
the leisure pool to the west of the old pool, which will also have a dedicated changing room
西侧池及更衣室正确,但另一个新更衣室未提。
- 题图证据
已查看上下两平面图:原中央池和相关设施保留;未来西侧休闲池及西南更衣室,东侧体育馆、东缘两舞蹈室、东南更衣室;入口左商店右咖啡馆,北部健身房延长。
改进建议
- 补东南更衣室,并简述中央泳池、座位和原更衣室保持不变。
连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9
现状和未来分段明确,未来按入口、东侧、健身房到西侧推进,位置连接总体清楚。
档位依据:顺序和衔接符合8档;未来顺序稍来回,未达9档最娴熟空间组织。
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Near the entrance, a sports shop (on the left) and a cafe (on the right) will be built
从入口建立空间定位。
A significant addition will be the leisure pool to the west of the old pool
末尾从东返回西,可更系统排列。
改进建议
- 按照西侧、中央、东侧顺序连续介绍新增设施。
词汇资源 LR8 / 9
redevelopment、comprehensive range、accompanied by、extensions等范围宽,方位词具体;significant、major略泛。
档位依据:自然准确用词支持8档;少量泛化修饰限制9档精炼。
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a more comprehensive range of sporting and recreational services
自然概括用途扩大。
forming one of the major extensions
可直接说明位置或面积关系,major较笼统。
改进建议
- 用具体新增设施和位置替换部分泛化评价词。
语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9
将来被动、关系从句、分词及并列结构准确,时态区分清楚。
档位依据:结构宽且多数无误达到8档;末句which附着位置略模糊,限制9档。
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will disappear and be replaced by indoor structures
将来时并列结构准确。
to the west of the old pool, which will also have a dedicated changing room
which表面可回指old pool,应明确更衣室服务对象。
改进建议
- 用with a new changing room to its south明确休闲池与更衣室关系。
评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)
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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

The maps illustrate the current layout of a university sports centre and the proposed redevelopment of the facility.
Overall, the sports centre is expected to expand significantly, with major additions around the existing central building to provide a more comprehensive range of sporting and recreational services.
As the layouts suggest, the sports centre at present consists of a relatively simple arrangement. A 25-metre swimming pool occupies the centre of the site, accompanied by a reception, a seating area, a changing room, and a gymnasium behind it. Two large outdoor courts are there, which are the only facilities located outside the main structure.
After redevelopment, however, the outdoor courts will disappear and be replaced by indoor structures. Near the entrance, a sports shop (on the left) and a cafe (on the right) will be built, while the reception area will remain in the same position. On the east side of the same pool, a large sports hall will be added, forming one of the major extensions. The current gymnasium will be enlarged, and two dance studios will be constructed beside it. A significant addition will be the leisure pool to the west of the old pool, which will also have a dedicated changing room.
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