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邀请朋友参加晋升派对Inviting friend to promotion party

Task 1 · General Training邀请/安排家庭与社会190 词AI 估评 8 分
AI 估评 8 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 8,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA8 / 9

聚会原因、希望朋友到场的个人理由和交通安排都充分,接站补足到家方式;聚会只说下周末,具体哪天和时间尚可明确。

档位依据:8档充分覆盖成立;9档可让邀请细节完全可执行。

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  • I have just been promoted.

    聚会理由明确。

  • Text me when you are near Brighton and I will meet you

    到达安排具体。

改进建议

  • 补充聚会的具体星期和开始时间。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

邀请、晋升、个人关系与路线按合理顺序展开,Without说明友情意义;anyway与besides稍显突兀。

档位依据:组织顺畅符合8档;9档可进一步自然化局部连接。

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  • Without your guidance and support

    解释邀请的重要性。

  • I’d better give you some directions

    转向实际路线自然。

改进建议

  • 用更连贯的问候引入邀请,避免突然anyway转向。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

perks、annual bonus、guidance及settled in自然准确,朋友语气整体一致;be so much a part略不如a big part自然。

档位依据:广泛准确资源达到8档;9档需少量搭配更自然。

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  • great perks like an annual bonus and a company car

    职位收益具体。

  • you were so much a part of my life

    可用a big part of my life。

改进建议

  • 采用a big part of my life表达朋友的重要性。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

过去完成、混合假设、关系从句和将来安排准确,多数句子无误;长并列句标点略拥挤。

档位依据:结构范围与准确性符合8档;9档需更精细的长句控制。

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  • I would have failed and would not be where I am today

    过去结果与现在状态的假设清楚。

  • from there you can continue to Brighton

    路线表达语法清楚。

改进建议

  • 将长路线句分成清楚的两步。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

既有2026原书教学情境,未把信件虚构日期当考试日期。

Write a letter to your friend in another town and invite him/ her to a party. In your letter explain: - why you are having this party - why you want your friend to be there - give directions on how to get there
Dear Sally, I hope your new cat has settled in; anyway, I am writing to invite you to my house next weekend for a party. The reason for the celebration is that I have just been promoted. Last Friday my boss told me that he had approved my application for the Senior Analyst position. It will mean more hours but also great perks like an annual bonus and a company car. I really want you to come because you were so much a part of my life when we were studying together at university. Without your guidance and support I am sure I would have failed and would not be where I am today; besides I really miss you. I’d better give you some directions so you can find my house. I think the best thing to do is to get the train to Victoria Station in London and from there you can continue to Brighton. Text me when you are near Brighton and I will meet you at the station. From there we can walk to my house. Please let me know if you can come. Best wishes, Anne
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