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婉拒海外朋友的假期邀请Declining overseas friend holiday invitation

Task 1 · General Training道歉/解释家庭与社会183 词AI 估评 7.5 分
AI 估评 7.5 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 7.25,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA7 / 9

感谢、不能前往的原因和其他消息都明确,先前承诺支撑拒绝;deep regret及earliest convenience使朋友语气偏正式。

档位依据:7档充分覆盖但语气仍可改善;8档需自然一致。

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  • I made this promise before receiving your kind invitation.

    不能赴约的理由清楚。

  • at your earliest convenience

    与朋友关系不够自然。

改进建议

  • 用轻松直接的感谢、歉意和回复请求。

连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9

感谢、装修原因和新消息有清楚推进,婚讯递进自然;前两段purpose与gratitude重复铺垫。

档位依据:清楚推进符合7档;8档需更简洁衔接。

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  • As to the reason I am unable to visit you

    段首铺垫过重。

  • My even bigger news is that

    自然突出婚讯。

改进建议

  • 直接写出装修承诺,省去解释理由的预告。

词汇资源 LR7 / 9

renovate、replace the carpet和got promoted准确,日常消息自然;expressing my gratitude等语体偏硬。

档位依据:资源足够且有变化,符合7档;8档需更稳定语体控制。

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  • paint the walls and replace the carpet

    装修活动具体。

  • it is with deep regret

    表达过于正式。

改进建议

  • 把deep regret改为更自然的sorry I cannot make it。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

宾语从句、过去承诺、未来计划和不定式准确,多数句子无误;部分句子串接较长。

档位依据:复杂结构准确性支持8档;9档还需更灵活精练。

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  • I promised my sister I would stay in town

    过去承诺的时态准确。

  • Steven and I are going to get married in March

    未来计划明确。

改进建议

  • 拆开问候与写信目的,减少重复的I hope结构。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

既有2026原书教学情境,未把信件虚构日期当考试日期。

A friend, who lives in another country, has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank him/her for the invitation - explain why you cannot come - give him/her your other news
Dear Peter, I hope you are well and the reason I am writing is to respond to your kind offer. Let me start by expressing my gratitude for the offer to stay with you over the Easter holidays. It was also very kind of you to offer to pick me up from the airport. I miss you so much so it is with deep regret that I cannot come this year. As to the reason I am unable to visit you, it is because I promised my sister I would stay in town and help her renovate her house. She bought the house last month and wants me to paint the walls and replace the carpet. I made this promise before receiving your kind invitation. I also want to let you know that Steven got promoted to Sales Manager. My even bigger news is that Steven and I are going to get married in March. I hope you can come here and join us for this special occasion. Please let me know if you can come at your earliest convenience. Best wishes, Sarah
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