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甘蔗制糖流程Manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane

Task 1 · Academic流程与阶段说明健康与生活169 词AI 估评 7.5 分
AI 估评 7.5 分查看四维评分详情

四个维度等权计分,均值 7.5,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA9 / 9

起点终点及全部七阶段准确覆盖,生长时间、两种收割方式、净化材料及后续产物都清楚,满足过程报告要求。

档位依据:任务所需阶段、顺序与关键细节完整准确,满足9档。

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  • They are harvested either manually by human labourers or by using machines.

    两种收割方式覆盖准确。

  • the produced juice is purified by a limestone filter before the juice is heated by an evaporator to produce syrup

    净化与蒸发的顺序、设备和产物准确。

  • 题图证据

    已查看完整流程图,七个编号及箭头清楚;两种收割方式汇入压榨,汁经石灰石过滤和加热蒸发,再离心分离,最后干燥冷却。

改进建议

  • 可在概述中直接点明七阶段,并用农业与加工两个部分使已有信息更简练。

连贯与衔接 CC7 / 9

按箭头顺序推进,阶段标记清楚;概述与细节重复生长时间,多次juice、produced sugar造成局部重复。

档位依据:清楚推进支持7档;重复与段落细分不足限制8档更流畅管理。

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  • when they are a year to a year and a half old

    概述给出的时间随后再次完整复述。

  • In the third step, these sugar cane stems are crushed

    阶段指示和指代明确。

改进建议

  • 概述保留总体过程,详细生长时间只在正文解释一次。

词汇资源 LR7 / 9

harvested、purified、evaporator、centrifuge等术语适切,范围足够;crusher machine和produced juice较笨重,重复product/sugar较多。

档位依据:专业词汇准确且有一定灵活性,符合7档;自然搭配和变化尚未达到8档。

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  • crushed in a crusher machine to produce juice

    意义清楚,但crusher machine略重复。

  • in a device called a centrifuge

    准确解释设备名称。

改进建议

  • 用crusher和the juice简化重复表达。

语法范围与准确性 GRA7 / 9

被动语态、either/or及时间从句控制较好;Sugar crystal使用单数而无冠词,准确性有局部不足。

档位依据:频繁无误句与复杂结构支持7档;名词数的错误及结构变化有限使其未达8档。

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  • They are harvested either manually by human labourers or by using machines.

    并列选择和被动结构正确。

  • Sugar crystal is separated from the syrup

    可数名词应为复数Sugar crystals并调整谓语。

改进建议

  • 改为Sugar crystals are separated,统一可数产物名词的数。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

作文题目

来源页题目,与同页选定答案配套;未核为实际考试真题

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
题目配图:IELTS Graph # 323 – Manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane
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The illustration summarises the different steps of producing sugar from sugar cane – starting from growing sugar cane and ending in making the final product, which is sugar. Overall, sugar cane plants get ready to be harvested for manufacturing sugar when they are a year to a year and a half old, and the sugar manufacturing process involves harvesting, crushing, making syrup, centrifuging, and finally drying and cooling. As the diagram depicts, sugar cane plants are harvested from the fields when they are between twelve and eighteen months old. They are harvested either manually by human labourers or by using machines. In the third step, these sugar cane stems are crushed in a crusher machine to produce juice. Afterwards, the produced juice is purified by a limestone filter before the juice is heated by an evaporator to produce syrup. Sugar crystal is separated from the syrup in a device called a centrifuge. The final step involves drying and cooling the produced sugar crystals to make the sugar that we consume.
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