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英国本科生与研究生的毕业去向What UK graduate and postgraduate students did after leaving college

Task 1 · Academic数据特征概括与比较科技与科学177 词AI 估评 7.5 分
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四个维度等权计分,均值 7.5,按半分档展示。AI 估评供学习参考。

任务完成度 TA7 / 9

八项数值近似准确,排名和两组规模差异清楚;most UK students进修易误解为多数乃至全部学生群体,实际样本排除全职且进修均不足一半。

档位依据:清楚概述及充分数字支持7档;范围和多数用语不精确限制8档。

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  • most UK students – both graduates and postgraduates – decided to enrol in further study

    应为未全职工作人群中最大的单个类别,并非过半。

  • Approximately 2,700 of them chose further study, compared with close to 2,500 who took part-time jobs.

    准确呈现研究生两项接近。

  • 题图证据

    已查看本科柱图:兼职17735、志愿3500、进修29665、失业16235。

  • 题图证据

    已查看研究生柱图:兼职2535、志愿345、进修2725、失业1625。

改进建议

  • 将most改成the largest group,并保持excluding full-time work的统计范围。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

引言概述后两组分别成段,相同项目排序方便对照,指代及转折自然。

档位依据:清楚结构和衔接达到8档;跨组直接比较较少,未充分展示9档娴熟组织。

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  • A similar pattern appears among postgraduates, though on a much smaller scale.

    自然承接本科组并建立规模差异。

  • whereas unemployment affected just over 16,000 of them

    衔接同组相近数量清楚。

改进建议

  • 可突出研究生兼职更接近进修,而本科差距较大。

词汇资源 LR7 / 9

opted、route、drawing、voluntary roles等表达足够灵活;completed their graduation搭配不自然,preferences对失业也不完全适切。

档位依据:词汇范围支持7档;少数搭配和语义问题限制8档。

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  • after they completed their graduation

    通常写after graduating或after completing their degree。

  • the relative preferences between the two groups were almost identical

    失业不一定是偏好,更宜称patterns或rankings。

改进建议

  • 改用destinations和patterns,并简化毕业表达。

语法范围与准确性 GRA8 / 9

条件、让步、关系及分词结构准确,时态和主谓一致稳定。

档位依据:结构广泛且多数无误支持8档;若干相似人数主句仍可更灵活以接近9档。

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  • if they did not move into full-time employment

    条件结构正确界定人群。

  • making this by far the most popular route

    分词结构准确连接数量和排名。

改进建议

  • 用跨组差距比较句增加变化,同时保留条件范围的准确表达。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Destination of UK graduates (excluding full-time work) 2008 Destination of UK postgraduates (excluding full-time work) 2008
题目配图:IELTS Graph # 341 – What UK graduate and postgraduate students did after leaving college
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题目配图:IELTS Graph # 341 – What UK graduate and postgraduate students did after leaving college
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The column charts illustrate what UK graduates and postgraduates chose to do in 2008 if they did not move into full-time employment. The categories shown include part-time work, voluntary work, further study and unemployment. Overall, most UK students – both graduates and postgraduates – decided to enrol in further study in 2008, while voluntary work was the least common choice made by them. Despite the differences in numbers, the relative preferences between the two groups were almost identical. Among graduates, well over 29,000 individuals opted to continue their studies, making this by far the most popular route. Part-time work was the second most common activity for them, drawing more than 17,000 graduates, whereas unemployment affected just over 16,000 of them. Only a small minority, around 3,500, chose voluntary work after they completed their graduation. A similar pattern appears among postgraduates, though on a much smaller scale. Approximately 2,700 of them chose further study, compared with close to 2,500 who took part-time jobs. Around 1,600 remained unemployed, while just 350 entered voluntary roles.
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