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学校长假与缩短假期的理由Reasons for Lengthening or Shortening School Holidays

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任务回应 TR8 / 9

两问都充分相关展开,考试压力到恢复动机、低龄练习需求及低收入家长困难说明清楚;校外成长部分主要列活动,深度稍有限。

档位依据:8档充分回应成立;9档需少量观点有更具体机制。

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  • younger students who require regular practice in subjects such as mathematics and reading

    短假理由具体。

  • travel, participate in sports, or learn practical skills

    长假成长主要列举。

改进建议

  • 选一项假期活动说明学校较难提供的成长机会。

连贯与衔接 CC8 / 9

长假价值与短假理由两段对称,内部顺序清楚;每段先泛泛预告,再One/Another,连接略显式。

档位依据:8档易读成立;9档需更自然精练。

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  • There are several important benefits associated with long school holidays.

    段首重复引言预告。

  • Another argument is that long school holidays create difficulties

    清晰但显式列举。

改进建议

  • 直接以恢复精力和学习连贯性开段,减少预告句。

词汇资源 LR8 / 9

academic pressure、refreshed、childcare及lower-income households准确,词汇足够灵活;long school holidays重复较多,life experiences较泛。

档位依据:8档广泛准确成立;9档需更多精确变化。

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  • rest and recover from academic pressure

    搭配自然。

  • financial pressure and stress

    家长后果表达清楚。

改进建议

  • 在指称明确时用these breaks,并具体说明校外技能。

语法范围与准确性 GRA9 / 9

原因、关系、被动和分词结构准确,复杂句有变化,标点稳定。

档位依据:范围与充分控制符合9档。

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  • skills that are not taught at school

    关系从句与被动准确。

  • students may return to school feeling more motivated and refreshed

    分词补语准确。

改进建议

  • 保持原因从句和状态补语的准确性。

评分日期:2026-10-23 · 评分规则:IELTS 写作公开评分标准(2023 年 5 月版)

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In many countries, primary and secondary schools close for two months or more in the summer holidays. What is the value of long school holidays? What are the arguments in favour of shorter school holidays?
In many nations, elementary and high schools have summer holidays that last for two months or even longer. This essay discusses the benefits these extended breaks provide and arguments supporting the idea of reducing their length. There are several important benefits associated with long school holidays. One major value of long school holidays is that they allow students to rest and recover from academic pressure. During the school year, many children experience stress from exams, homework, and extracurricular activities, so a lengthy break gives them time to relax mentally and physically. As a result, students may return to school feeling more motivated and refreshed. Another important advantage is that long holidays provide opportunities for personal development outside the classroom. Children can spend more time with their families, travel, participate in sports, or learn practical skills that are not taught at school. There are also several reasons to support shorter school holidays. One reason is that long breaks can negatively affect students’ academic progress because children may forget knowledge and study habits during extended periods away from school. This problem is particularly serious for younger students who require regular practice in subjects such as mathematics and reading. Another argument is that long school holidays create difficulties for working parents. In many families, both parents work full-time and may struggle to find childcare during extended vacations. This can create financial pressure and stress, especially for lower-income households. In conclusion, long school holidays are valuable because they allow students to recover from academic stress and develop life experiences outside school. Nevertheless, supporters of shorter holidays argue that they help students maintain academic progress and reduce childcare problems for working families.
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